Second day on the year
I came back home in Tokyo from my hometown.
Since most people who spent time in their hometown usually come back their home on the second day or third day of the year, heavy traffic jams occur around Japan.
Sure enough,I was stuck into a traffic jam on a freeway today.
However, I was lucky because I could see one of the most beautiful architecture in Japan.
It's Tokyo Station.
The terminal of the freeway bus is Tokyo station.
Tokyo Station is famous for its historic brick appearance.
Although the station has been restored for around three years, the restoration was completed shortly before.
I took a picture below after getting off the bus.
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I came back home in to Tokyo from my hometown.
Since most people whospent spend time in their hometown usually come back to their homes on the second day or third day of the year, heavy traffic jams occur around Japan.
Sure enough, I was stuck into a traffic jam on a freeway today.
However, I was lucky because I could see one of the most beautiful pieces of architecture in Japan.
It's Tokyo Station.
The terminal of the freeway bus is Tokyo station.
Tokyo Station is famous for its historic brick appearance.
Although the station has been restored for around three years, the restoration was completed shortly before.
I tooka the picture below after getting off the bus.
***Notes***
When you wrote:
"...most people who spend time in their hometown usually come back to their homes on the second day or third day of the year..."
You can also say:
-most people who spend time in their hometown usually come back home on the second day or third day of the year
-most people who spend time in their hometowns usually go back home on the second day or third day of the year
-most people who spend time in their hometowns usually go back to their homes on the second day or third day of the year
When you wrote:
"I took the picture below after getting off the bus."
You can also say:
-I took a picture after getting off the bus, which is shown below.
-Below, you can seen a picture I took after getting off the bus.
-Below is a picture I took after getting off the bus.
Since most people who
Sure enough, I was stuck in
However, I was lucky because I could see one of the most beautiful pieces of architecture in Japan.
It's Tokyo Station.
The terminal of the freeway bus is Tokyo station.
Tokyo Station is famous for its historic brick appearance.
Although the station has been restored for around three years, the restoration was completed shortly before.
I took
***Notes***
When you wrote:
"...most people who spend time in their hometown usually come back to their homes on the second day or third day of the year..."
You can also say:
-most people who spend time in their hometown usually come back home on the second day or third day of the year
-most people who spend time in their hometowns usually go back home on the second day or third day of the year
-most people who spend time in their hometowns usually go back to their homes on the second day or third day of the year
When you wrote:
"I took the picture below after getting off the bus."
You can also say:
-I took a picture after getting off the bus, which is shown below.
-Below, you can seen a picture I took after getting off the bus.
-Below is a picture I took after getting off the bus.
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Second day of the year
I came back home to Tokyo from my hometown.Since most people who spent time in their hometown usually return to their home on the second day or third day of the year, heavy traffic jams occur around Japan.
Sure enough, I was stuck in a traffic jam on the freeway today.
However, I was lucky because I could see one of the most beautiful pieces of architecture in Japan.
It's Tokyo Station.
The terminal of the freeway bus is Tokyo station.
Tokyo Station is famous for its historic brick appearance. construction. "appearance" is OK but "construction" sounds better
Although the station has been in restoration for about three years, it was completed shortly before ???. write a date or something here
I took the picture below after getting off the bus.
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きれいですね〜
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It looks great. Thanks for sharing!
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