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OTHER WAYS TO LEARN This essay will show different possibilities to raise students' awareness of the importance of wildlife conversation. It will examine the positive impact of celebrating National Wildlife Day with an excursion where students will have the opportunity to know more about this topic. On National Wildlife Day, there are a lot of activities, competitions between schools, advertising campaigns in the media and it will be a great opportunity to motivate students to participate. It could also be an option to know students in other schools and do something together. These kind of things are always something different where students have special enthusiasm. Maybe a study about species which are in dangerous or what are the current problems with the species in our area, both could be examples where students could work.

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OTHER WAYS TO LEARN

This essay will show different possibilities for raising students' awareness of the importance of wildlife conversation. It will examine the positive impact of celebrating National Wildlife Day with an excursion where students will have the opportunity to know more about this topic.

On National Wildlife Day, there are a lot of activities, competitions between schools and advertising campaigns in the media;  it will be a great opportunity to motivate students to participate. It could also be an option to know/meet/get to know students in other schools and do something together. These kinds of things are always something different where students have special enthusiasm (no entiendo el sentido aqui). Possibilities include a study about species which are endangered or what are the current problems with the species in our area; both could be examples/topics that students could investigate.
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OTHER WAYS TO LEARN

This essay will show different possibilities to raise students' awareness of the importance of wildlife conversation. It will examine the positive impact of celebrating National Wildlife Day with an excursion where students will have the opportunity to know more about this topic.

On National Wildlife Day, there are a lot of activities, competitions between schools, advertising campaigns in the media and it will be a great opportunity to motivate students to participate. Another option could be getting to know students in other schools and do something together. These kind of things are always something different where students are especially enthusiastic. Maybe a study about species which are endangered or what are the current problems with the species in our area, both could be examples where students could work together.


This is really great Antonio! I just tried to make some things sound a little more "native". Keep writing!

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