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She Got a Snake Bite I passed on a strange and funny headline about the famous actress Lindsy Lohan who is spending her new year's holiday in Thailand, then I read the details that she was bitten by a snake where she is staying in a place which is surrounded by water and trees as all the touristic places in Thailand. Lindsy was treated and there wasn't any danger as she mentioned in a tweet. She also said that the doctor told her that the snake bite brings good luck.

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She Got a Snake Bite

I passed on came across a strange and funny headline about the famous actress Lindsay Lohan who is spending her new year's holiday in Thailand. then I read the details that she was bitten by a snake at the place where she is staying, in a place which is surrounded by water and trees, as like all the touristic places in Thailand.
Lindsay was treated, and there wasn't any danger as she mentioned in a tweet.
She also said that the doctor told her that the snake bite brings good luck.

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Good writing Nada! The phrase "touristic places" is grammatically correct but it sounds kind of strange, and I don't think people would use it in English. I'm not sure if we have a better word. Maybe "resorts" or something like that?

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I came across a strange and funny headline about the famous actress Lindsy Lohan, who is spending her New Year's holiday in Thailand. She was bitten by a snake at the place she was staying. in a place which is surrounded by water and trees as all the touristic places in Thailand. Such tourist accommodations in Thailand are often surrounded by water and trees, so snakes are not uncommon. Lindsy was treated and she wasn't in any further danger, as she mentioned in a tweet. She also said that the doctor told her that snake bites bring good luck.

- Just my opinion. I am not a gramarian. This is my first correction :)

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I passed on a strange and funny headline about the famous actress Lindsy Lohan who is spending her new year's holiday in Thailand, then I read the details that she was bitten by a snake where she is staying in a place which is surrounded by water and trees as all the touristic places in Thailand.
Lindsy was treated and there wasn't any danger as she mentioned in a tweet.
She also said that the doctor told her that the snake bite brings good luck.

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