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ENG TO CHINESE
All of these first-week experiences will make great life-time memories but the best assets Harvard has offered me thus far have been the other students I've met. Everone I've encountered here has been so down-to-earth that every time I see someone either singing an incredibly moving song at an A Capella Concert , performing an amazing violin solo at a talent show , or saying something extremely profound in one of my classes , I'm blown away! Appreciating and being surrounded by so many gifted people is what has made my first week at Harvard a truly priceless experience . One week down , four more years to go-I can't wait !
所有这些第一周的经历都将是一生难忘的回忆，但迄今为止，哈佛大学给我提供的最好的资产是我遇到的其他学生。每个我遇到的在这里一直如此脚踏实地，每一次我看到有人可以唱动人的歌在清唱音乐会，表演才艺展示惊人的小提琴独奏，或说一些我的一类极为深刻，我被吹走！让我在哈佛度过的第一周是一次真正无价的经历。一个星期下来，要走了我四年多的时间不能等待！
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考试的内容， 最难和重要的部分。 请看一下！
ENG TO CHINESEAll of these first-week experiences will make great life-time memories but the best assets Harvard has offered me thus far have been the other students I've met. Everone I've encountered here has been so down-to-earth that every time I see someone either singing an incredibly moving song at an A Capella Concert , performing an amazing violin solo at a talent show , or saying something extremely profound in one of my classes , I'm blown away! Appreciating and being surrounded by so many gifted people is what has made my first week at Harvard a truly priceless experience . One week down , four more years to go-I can't wait !
所有这些第一周的经历都将是一生难忘的回忆，但迄今为止，哈佛大学给我提供的最好的资产是我遇到的其他学生。每个我遇到的在这里一直如此脚踏实地，每一次我看到有人可以唱动人的歌在清唱音乐会，表演才艺展示惊人的小提琴独奏，或说一些我的一类极为深刻极具深刻见解的话语，我被吹走 我都被深深地折服了 ！让 我在哈佛度过的第一周是一次真正无价的经历。一个星期下来，要走了我四年多的时间不能等待！ 一个星期过去了，还有四年等着我，真是让人迫不及待。
注：因为 "A Capella" 不只是 "清唱" (无伴奏)，而包含更多的演唱技巧，在台湾，我们一般直接取其音翻译为 "阿卡贝拉"。
所有這些第一周的經歷都將是一生難忘的回憶，但迄今為止，哈佛大學給我提供的最好的資產是我遇到的其他學生。
在這裡，每個所有我遇到的人都是如此地腳踏實地。每一次我看到有些人不是在阿卡貝拉音樂會中唱出令人無可置信的動人歌曲、在才藝秀中演出迷人的小提琴獨奏，或是在課堂中講述極具深刻見解的話語，我都被深深地折服了 ! 被這麼多深具才華的人們所圍繞，使得我的哈佛第一周經歷成為真正的無價之寶。一個星期過去了，還有四年等著我去經歷，這真是讓我等不及了。
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You have the gist in the Chinese translation and I won't dwell on your grammar etc since you had a correction already. Just some finer points in translation:
1. A capella = 無伴奏合唱
2. Idiomatic expressions are the most difficult to translate. You cannot translate them directly because they are cultural biases. It may not make sense in the target language. You have to translate by meaning, as according to the cultural preference in the target language.
I'm blown away! = 令我神魂登天(literally, lifted my soul to the heavens!)
3. Your use of 深刻 is OK but 高深 is better. Here's an idiom you can use: 口齒
ENG TO CHINESE考试的内容， 最难和重要的部分。 请看一下！
所有这些第一周的经历都将是一生难忘的回忆，但迄今为止，哈佛大学给我提供的最好的资产是我遇到的其他学生。每个我遇到的在这里一直如此脚踏实地，每一次我看到有人可以唱动人的歌在清唱音乐会，表演才艺展示惊人的小提琴独奏，或说一些我的一类极为深刻，我被吹走！让我在哈佛度过的第一周是一次真正无价的经历。一个星期下来，要走了我四年多的时间不能等待！
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