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Romantic story When the clock struck I was thinking in you. I don’t know why he was able to make me fell so better. When I saw him in that moment, I got stuck at the time. Today, he called me and suddenly he pulled a flower from his pocket and gave me. My eyes were full of tears, it was a beautiful moment. He said me: Do you want to go away with me? In the first moment I got socket and frightened, but I was fall in love to him and I said: yes, I do. I was truly happy with my decision. We got away to distance city, where nobody would meet us. Next to us new house there were a high mountain, the view was amazing! there were many stores in the street, sights to enjoy, it was a plain place, but truly beautiful. I don’t think it’s really sunk in that I was together with him, in a peaceful place, that was a perfect life for me.

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Romantic story

When the clock struck, I was thinking in of (<--We "think of" people in English, not "in.") you. I don’t know why he was able to make me feel so much better. When I saw him in at that moment, I got stuck at the in time. Today, he called me and suddenly he pulled a flower from his pocket and gave it to me. My eyes were full of tears; it was a beautiful moment. He said me: Do you want to go away with me? In the At first, moment I got socket was shocked and frightened, but I was fall in love to with him and I said: Yes, I do. I was truly happy with my decision.

We got away to a distance city where nobody would meet run into us. Next to us our new house there were was a high large mountain; the view was amazing! There were many stores in the streets and sights to enjoy; it was a plain place, but truly beautiful. I don’t think it’s really sunk in that I was together with him, in a peaceful place, and that I was living a perfect life for me.

Aww, how cute! Nicely written, Leidiane!

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