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I doing dite. Before one year, My weight is 108 Kg. lol well, I feel need to dite at that time, but I been soldier. so...I didn't know what I have to did for me. In Army, To me, I could did something is very limited. For example, I can meet somebody outside at a week once and go to outside. Even can't use smartphone so we use payphone to call family for night. so..I find do something. Fortunately, I easy find something. That is health. Well...In the beginning, I ran each 2 Km everyday...I felt died really. Anyway, Past a few days, I can ran 3 Km. At that time, My weight 90 Kg. lol And Past the more days, I try muscle training. Everyday, I did ran and training. Now, unbelievable, My weight 83 Kg. I think really I did best. aren't you? or not? I think. lo

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I am on a  diet.

One year ago, my weight was 108 Kg. lol
Well, I felt the need to diet at that time, but I was a soldier. so...I didn't know what I had to do.
In the army, To me, what I was able to do, was very limited. For example, I could meet somebody outside once a week. I couldn't even  use a smartphone, so we used a payphone to call (our) family at night.
So..I had to find something I could do. Fortunately, I could easily find something. That is (important for my) health.
Well...In the beginning, I ran each 2 Km every day...I really felt like I was dying died really. Anyway, Past a few days ago, I was able to run 3 Km.
At that time, my weight was 90 Kg. lol
And even before that, I tried muscle training. Every day, I did ran and trained.
Now, unbelievable, my weight is 83 Kg.

I really think really I did my best. don't you? or not? I think so. lo


Great job Sin! I definitely think you did your best. Congratulations!

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I doing dite. I'm on diet

A year ago, my weight was 108 kg. lol
Well, I felt that I need to go on diet at that time, but I was a soldier so I didn't know what to do.
What I could do in army was very limited. For example, I could go out and meet somebody once a week. I couldn't even use smartphone so that I had to use payphone to call family in the evening. (You have to use same subject in 1 sentence, its either "I" or "We").
so..I find do something. Fortunately, I easy find something. That is health.

(Re-write: So, eventually, I found something else to do. It was to improve my health)

Well...at the beginning, I ran each 2 km everyday...I felt died really. (I was exhauted) Anyway, Past a few days, but a few days later, I could run 3 km.
At that time, my weight was 90 Kg. lol
Few days after, I tried muscle training. Everyday, I run and doing exercise.
Now, my weight is 83 Kg. Unbelievable.

I think really I did good. Do you think so?

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I doing dite.  I am on a diet.

Before one year, My weight is 108 Kg. lol (One year ago, I weighed a 108 Kg)
well, I feel need to dite at that time, but I been soldier. so...I didn't know what I have to did for me.
In Army, To me, I could did something is very limited. For example, I can meet somebody outside at a week once and go to outside. Even can't use smartphone so we use payphone to call family for night.
so..I find do something. Fortunately, I easy find something. That is health.
Well...In the beginning, I ran each 2 Km everyday...I felt died really. Anyway, Past a few days, I can ran 3 Km.
At that time, My weight 90 Kg. lol
And Past the more days, I try muscle training. Everyday, I did ran and training.
Now, unbelievable, My weight 83 Kg.

I think really I did best. aren't you? or not? I think. lo
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I am on diet.

one year ago , My weight was 108 Kg. lol
well, I felt that I need to go on a diet at that time, but I was a soldier. so...I didn't know what I had to do.
In Army, what I could do was very limited. For example, I just could go outside and meet somebody once a week . Even i couldn't use smartphone so we just could use payphone to call family at night.
Fortunately, I easily find something to do. That is practice for my health.
Well...in the beginning, I ran about 2 Km everyday...I felt like that i was dying . Anyway, a few days later , I could ran 3 Km.
At that time, My weight was 90 Kg. lol
And more days later , I tried muscle training too Everyday, I ran and did muscle training.
Now, unbelievable, My weight is 83 Kg.

I think I really did my best. Don't you? or not? I think. lo
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You´re welcome Sin. At this link you can see the difference between "everyday" and "every day": https://www.grammarly.com/blog/everyday-every-day/

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