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Introduction of myself I am Sandy Lin. I am currently doing my Master's degree in art theory and criticism at Department of Arts and Design. I graduated from Tainan National University of the Arts, and my major is art history. Since I have learned how to read and interpret artworks during the university life, I have the capability to understand the meanings of visual arts. After starting my Master’s degree, I have had the opportunity to do deeper research in art theory and criticism. Besides, I had been the editor of Art Critique of Taiwan, which is an art magazine, and I participated in a special project called “The Ethnography of Taiwan Photography History”. I interviewed some Taiwan photographers. When I meet each of them, their notions and beliefs gathered together in my mind. These ideas help me a lot, as I read photos. Moreover, I also had been the intern editor of Voices of Photography, which is an independent publication about contemporary photography. During that time, I understood how an independent publication operating and how much passion the chief editor has. These experiences made me write more precisely, accumulate many ideas about photography, and expanding ways of seeing. My research interests are in the areas of contemporary art and photography. It is exciting that I can expand the knowledge and understanding of contemporary art and photography during the time of studying for the master's degree.

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I'm going to edit this for style more than grammar.  Your English is very good. Others may have different ideas on how you should express an idea but these are mine and I tried to suggest alternative phrasing but not change your individual voice.


My Introduction

I am Sandy Lin. I am currently working on my Master's degree in art theory and criticism at the Department of Arts and Design. I graduated from Tainan National University of the Arts and my major is Art History. Since I have learned how to read and interpret artworks during my university life, I have the capability of understanding the meanings of visual arts. Since beginning my Master’s degree, I have had the opportunity to do deeper research in art theory and criticism.

I have been the editor of Art Critique of Taiwan, which is an art magazine and I participated in a special project called “The Ethnography of Taiwan Photography History”. I interviewed some Taiwanese photographers. When I met each of them, I began to understand their notions and beliefs. These ideas helped me a lot as I looked at their photos. Moreover, I also had also been the Editor-intern of Voices of Photography, which is an independent publication about contemporary photography. During that time, I learned how an independent publication operates and how much passion the chief editor must have. These experiences made me write more precisely, accumulate many ideas about photography  and expand my ways of seeing.

My research interests are in the areas of contemporary art and photography. It is exciting that I can expand the knowledge and understanding of contemporary art and photography during my time of studying for my Master's degree.

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Introduction of myself

I am Sandy Lin. I am currently doing my Master's degree in art theory and criticism at the Department of Arts and Design.  I graduated from Tainan National University of the Arts where my major was in art history. (the other way was good too, just this one is how i'd say it.) Since ("as" could also be used both is good) I have learned how to read and interpret artworks during the university life (it could be said like this if it became something where something happened.  Like university life is drinking a lot so  "oh i had fun doing "the university life" or oh living with less money as a student "ah the university life, i don't want to go back to it" or "the university life is good"), I have the capability to understand the meaning of visual arts. After starting my Master’s degree, I have had the opportunity to do deeper research into art theory and criticism.

Besides that (or "Besides the above"), I had been the editor of "Art Critique of Taiwan", which is an art magazine and I participated in a special project called “The Ethnography of Taiwan Photography History” where I interviewed some Taiwanese photographers (photographers in Taiwan (if not only Taiwanese)). When I met (unless it is still ongoing and you meet now also) each of them, their notions and beliefs gathered together in my mind. These ideas helped(if in the past) me a lot, as I read photos. Moreover, I also had been the intern editor of "Voices of Photography", which is an independent publication about contemporary photography. During that time, I understood how an independent publication operated and how much passion the chief editor has for his job. These experiences made me write more precisely,accumulate more (feels better but both are fine) ideas about photography, and expand my ways of seeing.

My research interests are in the areas of contemporary art and photography. It is exciting that I can expand the knowledge and understanding of contemporary art and photography during the time of studying for the master's degree. (feels like too many "the" so you could put "my" in one of those places "during my time of studying for the master's degree" or "During the time time of studying for my master's degree")  I didn't correct any , . punctuation
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Thank you Romário.
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What a great rèsume!! Congrats!!

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