HSK 5 - 写作 13
请以"我喜欢的一项运动"为题一段说。尽量用上本课所学的生词,字数不少于100字。
我喜欢的一项运动是自由搏击。这项运动是在日本发明的,不过它是在世界各地练习的。它混合拳击技术和空手道踢技术。自由搏击不必泰拳,不允许肘部和膝盖的打击。我练过的美国变体也不允许低踢,所以你只能踢在腰部以上。自由搏击对于减肥,健身,增加速度和耐力是非常好的。并且它对自卫有好处。
PS. 图片里的男人是我以前的教练,一位世界冠军。他叫Iván Buselo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3qS0ovj8Icg
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HSK 5 - 写作 13
请以"我喜欢的一项运动"为题一段说。尽量用上本课所学的生词,字数不少于100字。我喜欢的一项运动是自由搏击。这项运动是在日本发明的,不过它是在世界各地练习的。它混合拳击技术和空手道踢技术。自由搏击不必泰拳,不允许肘部和膝盖的打击。我练过的美国变体也不允许低踢,所以你只能踢在腰部以上。自由搏击对于减肥,健身,增加速度和耐力是非常好的。并且它对自卫有好处。
PS. 图片里的男人是我以前的教练,一位世界冠军。他叫Iván Buselo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3qS0ovj8Icg
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"A sport that I like is kickboxing. This sport was invented in Japan, but it's practiced all over the world. It combines both boxing and karate kicking techniques. Kickboxing unlike Muay Thai, doesn't allow elbow or knee strikes. The American version/variant that I practice doesn't allow low kicks either, so you can only kick above the waist. Kickboxing is excellent for losing weight, getting fit, increasing speed and stamina. Furthermore it's good for self-defense".
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Hey Miguel, I recommend you also writing your paragraph in English, which will be really helpful to understand. Your Chinese is good, but there are still some sentences ambiguous and they confused the reader.
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