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Seville named best city to travel to in 2018 by Lonely Planet I´m happy to hear that the city where I live is named by the magazine lonely planet, best place to visit to in 2018. Seville is the fourth biggest city in Spain. Cristobal Colon, America´s discoverer was buried in Seville´s cathedral which is famous too by your tower called Giralda. Cervantes, the Quijote's author was imprisoned in the ancient Seville´s jail and there, he imagined his fantastic book. Seville is also famous for its kindly people and a delicious gastronomy. I hope I have written an interesting story about my city. Be welcome :).

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Seville named best city to travel to in 2018 by Lonely Planet

I´m happy to hear that the city where I live is  has been named by the magazine Lonely Planet magazine, as the best place to visit to in 2018.

Seville is the fourth biggest* city in Spain. The discover of America, Cristobal Colon, America´s discoverer, was is buried in Seville´s cathedral which is also famous too by your for its tower called Giralda tower. 

Cervantes, the Quijote's author of Don Quijote, was imprisoned in the ancient Seville´s ancient jail and it was there, that he became inspired to write imagined* his fantastic book.

Seville is also famous for its kindly friendly people and a delicious gastronomy.

I hope I have written an interesting story about my city. Be welcome* :).


Nicely done! Just a few points on the asterisks (*). 

*1: I think largest is better than biggest in this context, but both work. 

*2: Imagined sort of works but it doesn't seem quite right to me. You could also say, "Dreamed up his fantastic book" or "Conceived his fantastic book". 

*3: Be welcome is not quite right either. You could say, "Visitors are welcome". 



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Seville named best city to travel to in 2018 by Lonely Planet

I´m happy to hear that the city where (in which) I live is (has been) named best place to visit in 2018) by the magazine lonely planet, best place to visit to in 2018.

Seville is the fourth biggest city in Spain. Cristobal Colon, America's discoverer (who discovered America) was  (is) buried in Seville´s cathedral which is famous too by your tower called Giralda. (Which is known for its famous tower called the Giralda)

Cervantes, the Quijote's author (the author of Quijote)  was imprisoned in the ancient jail of Seville jail and there, he imagined (conceived) his fantastic book.

Seville is also famous for its kindly kind people and a delicious gastronomy.

I hope I have written an interesting story about my city. Be welcome :). (You are always welcome)
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Seville named best city to travel to in 2018 by Lonely Planet

I´m happy to hear that the city where I live is named by the magazine lonely planet, best place to visit to in 2018.

Seville is the fourth biggest city in Spain. Cristobal Colon, America´s discoverer was buried in Seville´s cathedral which is famous too by your a tower called Giralda.

Cervantes, the Quijote's author was imprisoned in the ancient Seville´s jail and there, he imagined thought about his fantastic book.

Seville is also famous for its kindly people and a delicious gastronomy.

I hope that I have written an interesting story about my city. Be welcome :).

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