One day from my diary.
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Today I was all day in a hurry. First, training - the most import part of a day. Three weeks ago I've sprained my ankle badly and I can't run, but I can do many different exercises . I don't give up and do as many as I can. After training I went to a physiotherapist for an ankle treatment. Michael - who is a physiotherapist made me laser, magnetic field and ultrasound. I hope it will gonna help me. After that, I came back home quickly and started to prepare for a Christmas dinner with people from my former job. Like always I didn't know what to wear. Finally, I wore warm clothes (jumper and a t-shirt) and a pair of jeans, because it's cold outside. What is worse from being hungry? Feeling cold. I know something about it... My boyfriend is, let me say it gently, a little bit frugal (I have to wear two jumpers and wool socks at home during autumn and winter, because for him radiator sears). Coming back to my day, I met with people from my former job. We had a good time together, but I didn't sit with them till end because my boyfriend was coming back from one week delegation so I wanted to be at home as fast as it possible. I went home and he was in the middle of watching series, so I decided to write my diary.
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One day from my diary.
I will be grateful for your correction!Today I was in a hurry. First, training--the most important part of the day. Three weeks ago, I sprained my ankle badly, so I can't run, but I can do many different exercises. I don't give up and do as many as I can. After training, I went to a physiotherapist for an ankle treatment. Michael (who is a physiotherapist) gave me laser, magnetic field and ultrasound treatments. I hope it is going to help me heal. After that, I came home quickly and started to prepare for a Christmas dinner with people from my former job. Like always, I didn't know what to wear. Finally, I put on warm clothes (jumper and a t-shirt) and a pair of jeans because it's cold outside. What is worse than being hungry? Feeling cold. I know something about it...My boyfriend is, let me say it gently, a bit frugal (I have to wear two jumpers and wool socks at home during autumn and winter because he doesn't like turning on the radiator). Anyway, I had dinner with my former coworkers. We had a good time together, but I didn't sit with them till the end because my boyfriend was coming home after a week away, so I wanted to be at home as fast as possible. I went home, and he was in the middle of watching a TV series, so I decided to write in my diary.
Well done! I think I understood everything you wanted to say, and I made corrections above to make it clearer and correct a few grammar errors. You have very good written English! I am joining italki soon as an English teacher, so look for my name in a couple of weeks. Best wishes to you, and good luck on learning more English! Erin Stokes
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One day from my diary.
I will be grateful for your correction!Today I was in a hurry all day. First, training - the most important part of a day. Three weeks ago, I sprained my ankle badly and now I can't run, but I can do many different exercises. I don't give up and do as many as I can. After training, I went to a physiotherapist for an ankle treatment. Michael - who is a physiotherapist, gave me laser*, magnetic field and ultrasound. I hope it will help me. After that, I came back home quickly and started to prepare for a Christmas dinner with people from my former job. Like always, I didn't know what to wear. Finally, I wore warm clothes (jumper and a t-shirt) and a pair of jeans, because it's cold outside. What is worse from being hungry? Feeling cold. I know something about it... My boyfriend is, let me say it gently, a little bit frugal *(I have to wear two jumpers and wool socks at home during autumn and winter, because for him radiator sears*). Coming back to my day, I met with people from my former job. We had a good time together, but I didn't sit with them until the end because my boyfriend was coming back from a one week delegation so I wanted to be at home as fast as it possible. I went home and he was in the middle of watching a television series, so I decided to write my diary.
*laser and magnetic field?
* radiator sears?
* I love this sentence!
Overall, I think it's great! Nice use of contractions!
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One day from my diary.
I will would be grateful for your correction!Today I was all day in a hurry in a hurry all day. First, training - the most import part of a my day. Three weeks ago I've I sprained my ankle badly and so I can't run, but I can do many other different exercises . I don't give up, and do as many as I can. After training I went to a physiotherapist for an ankle treatment. Michael, who is a physiotherapist, made me a(?) laser, magnetic field and ultrasound [I'm not sure what this is, so I'm not sure how to express it in English properly.]. I hope it will gonna help me [you can also say "I hope it's gonna help me", but "gonna" is slang, so only use it in informal writing.]. After that, I came back home quickly and started to prepare for a Christmas dinner with people from my former job[good!]. Like always, I didn't know what to wear. Finally, I wore warm clothes (jumper and a t-shirt) and a pair of jeans, because it's cold outside. What is worse from than being hungry? Feeling cold. I know something about it... My boyfriend is, let me say it gently, a little bit frugal (I have to wear two jumpers and wool socks at home during autumn and winter, because for him radiator[?] sears). Coming back to my day, I met with people from my former job. We had a good time together, but I didn't sit with them til the end, because my boyfriend was coming back from a one week delegation, so I wanted to be at home as fast soon as it possible. I went home and he was in the middle of watching a series [tv series?], so I decided to write my diary.
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