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New job begins and Christmas songs Today is the first day of my new job. My boss organized an experience-sharing meeting this afternoon. One of the group members shared her experience of a complex deal happened recently and the other members asked questions. All of them sound very very professional to me, since some of the terms and structures I have little knowledge of. It will be a changeling job for me. After work, I went to the Bookworm Cafe to attend a monthly classical music open mic. Tonight was a bit different. Instead of playing instruments freely, like the event used to be about, the musicians there were singing Christmas songs. One piece after another. And 90 percent of them I hadn’t heard of before. I asked one of the audiences who sat beside me that why everyone can sing those songs, and she told me that these were all Christmas songs, and almost every European can sing these songs when they were kids. Even though I don’t understand the lyrics, I can feel the greatest and purest joy on those performers’ face and was deeply moved by the beautiful sound.

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New job begins and singing Christmas songs

Today is the first day of my new job. My boss organized an experience-sharing meeting this afternoon. One of the group members shared her experience of a complex deal that happened recently and the other members asked questions. All of them sounded very, very professional to me since I have little knowledge of some of the terms and structures. It will be a challenging job for me.

After work, I went to the Bookworm Cafe to attend a monthly classical music open mic. Tonight was a bit different. Instead of playing instruments freely like the event used to be about, the musicians there were singing Christmas songs, one piece after another. And 90 percent of them I hadn’t heard of before. I asked one of the audience members who sat beside me that why everyone was able to sing those songs.  She told me that they were all Christmas songs and almost every European sang these songs when they were kids. Even though I didn't understand the lyrics, I could see the greatest and purest joy on those performers’ faces and was deeply moved by the beautiful sounds.
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New job begins and Christmas songs

Today is the first day of my new job. My boss organized an experience-sharing meeting this afternoon. One of the group members shared her experience of a complex deal that happened recently and the other members asked questions. All of them sounded very very ["extremely" would probably work better here] professional to me, since some of the terms and structures I have little knowledge of. It will be a changeling [I believe you're looking for a word like "challenging" - changeling is a baby that has been taken by bad fairies!] job for me.

After work, I went to the Bookworm Cafe to attend a monthly classical music open mic. Tonight was a bit different. Instead of playing instruments freely, like the event used to be about, the musicians there were singing Christmas songs. One piece after another. And 90 percent of them I hadn’t heard of before. I asked one of the audience members / people in the audience who sat beside me that why everyone can sing those songs, and she told me that these were all Christmas songs, and almost every European learned to sing these songs when they were kids. Even though I didn't understand the lyrics, I could feel the greatest and purest joy on those performers’ faces and was deeply moved by the beautiful sound.


Great job! Your English is excellent. There were just a few tense and word choice problems. 

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