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Hi, I am still learning English, so, please correct if I have any mistakes.
Last summer, I’ve worked in a charity shop for around two weeks and I enjoyed it too much because it was a new experience for me, I have gained many new skills as I was dealing with many people and I had to show confidence in myself so this experience will enable me to both advance and flourish in my career life.
In the future, once I finish this course, I am going to use the skills that I’ve obtained to work in broadcasting companies, either as a multimedia specialist, a TV producer, operating the camera or editing the footage, in short, to be a Media producer immersed in the Media World Industry.
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My plan
Hi, I am still learning English, so, please correct if I have any mistakes.Last summer, I worked in a charity shop for around two weeks and I enjoyed it very much because it was a new experience for me, I have gained many new skills as I was dealing with many people and I had to show confidence in myself (or you could say, "I had to be confident" or "I had to practice being confident") so this experience will enable me to both advance and flourish in my career life.
In the future, Once I finish this course, I am going to use the skills that I’ve obtained to work in broadcasting companies, either as a multimedia specialist, a TV producer, operating the camera or editing the footage, in short, to be a Media producer immersed in the Media World Industry.
This is really great! There's not much that is wrong, just things you could say in different ways to sound more natural or emphasize different things. Keep writing!
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My plan
Hi, I am still learning English, so, please correct if I have any mistakes.Last summer, I worked in a charity shop for around two weeks and I enjoyed it so much because it was a new experience for me, I have gained many new skills as I was dealing with many people and I had to show confidence in myself so this experience will enable me to both advance and flourish in my life and career.
In the future, once I finish this course, I am going to use the skills that I’ve obtained to work in broadcasting companies, either as a multimedia specialist, a TV producer, operating the camera or editing the footage, in short, to be a media producer immersed in the media world industry.
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