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Translation The Song dynasty started from 960 year, its domination was until 1279 year. During this period, the economy of China developed sharply, and China also became the most advanced economy, its science, technology, philosophy and math were thriving. China in the Song dynasty was the first country that use the paper cash. Also, the gunpowder and movable-type printing were used firstly during the Song dynasty. As the increasing of the population, more and more people moved into the cities which had entertainment venues. The socity were diversity, people assembled to watch and trade the expensive artworks together. And the government system of the Song dynasty was also advanced, all the officer were selected by competitive exam.

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The Song dynasty started in from 960 year the year 960, and continued it's (it's is short for 'it is'. In English we put an apostrophe in these types of situations - 'do not' becomes 'don't', etc) domination was until 1279 year. During this period, the economy of China developed sharply, and China also became the most advanced economy, its and science, technology, philosophy and math were thriving. China in the Song dynasty was the first country that to use the paper cash. Also, the gunpowder and movable-type printing were used firstly during the Song dynasty. As the increasing of the population increased, more and more people moved into the cities which had entertainment venues. The socity Society was (society, despite being about lots of people, is a singular word. This happens in English a alot, so keep an eye on it - 'the government, the civilisation' etc) were diversity diverse, people assembled to watch and trade the expensive artworks together. And the government system of the Song dynasty was also advanced, all the officers were selected by a competitive exam.

It's generally good. You should focus on articles such as 'the' as I think you're overusing them. They are important, but sometimes not needed, maybe work on this, and you wil improve quickly! :)

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