Shopping
Last Saturday we were doing some shopping. We woke up early in the morning, had breakfast and set out to the nearby city. There is a huge mall there. We were going to buy some furniture. It was weekend so the shop center was overcrowded. I don’t like to do shopping in that time but I have no spare time on weekdays. There was too noisy, the big queues, people was annoyed. On the radio It was announced one little girl had lost. It was awful. Nevertheless we’ ve got what we wanted and came home at night.
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Shopping
Last Saturday, we were doing some shopping. We woke up early in the morning, had breakfast, and set out to the nearby city. There is a huge mall there. We were going to buy some furniture. It was the weekend, so the shopping center was overcrowded. I don’t like to do shopping in during that time, but I have no spare time on weekdays. There It was too noisy, the big queues were long, and people was were annoyed. On the radio, it was announced that one little girl had lost gone missing. It was awful. Nevertheless, we’ ve got what we wanted and came home at night.
Nicely written, Yuliya. I hope your next shopping experience is more pleasant =)
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Shopping
Last Saturday we did some shopping. We woke up early in the morning, had breakfast and set out to the nearby city. There is a huge mall there. We were going to buy some furniture. It was the weekend so the shopping center was overcrowded. I don’t like to do shopping at that time but I have no spare time on weekdays. It was too noisy, (or there was too much noise) big queues, people were annoyed. On the radio It was announced that a little girl was lost. It was awful. Nevertheless we’ ve got what we wanted and came home at night.If you use we were doing , you usually need a second action that interrupted the first action .
We were doing our shopping when it started raining , while we were doing our shopping we saw an old friend .
Very good !
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