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Day 1. I decided to keep a diary in English. Firstly I want to sya some facts about me. I was born and raised in a small village in Russia. My parents used to be a pediatrician but they are retired now. I have two elder siblings: brother and sister. Sister has two sons so I am an aunt. I have a baby too. My daughet is 1 year old. She can already walk. Her favourite toy is shoe. She likes sucking it.
I am a student. I am on a maternity live right now. I'm going to press charges to continue me education.
I am a keen reader. Last book that I've read was 'Poor dad, rich dad'. I liked it. I can honestly reckon that this book changed my mind.
I think it's enough for my first time. Till tomorrow!
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day 1
Day 1. I have decided to keep a diary in English. Firstly I want to sya say some facts a few things (sounds more natural) about myself me. I was born and raised in a small village in Russia. My parents used to be a pediatricians (plural as you have two parents) but they are retired now. I have two elder siblings: a brother and a sister. My sister has two sons so I am an aunt. I have a baby too. My daughter is 1 years old. She can already walk. Her favourite toy is a shoe. She likes sucking it.I am a student. I am on a maternity live leave right now. I'm going to press charges (press charges is usually used if you are accusing someone of a crime) to continue my education.
I am a keen reader. The last book (you need the as you are talking about a specific example) that I've read was 'Poor dad, rich dad'. I liked it. I can honestly reckon say (more natural) that this book changed my mind. ('changed my mind' usually needs something after it eg. it changed my mind about the environment)
I think it's that's enough for my first time. Till tomorrow!
Great first effort Elena, just a few things I would correct. If you have any questions or need any help please feel free to send me a message.
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