Time. I've been thinking about what happend 1 year ago. I met a lot of people in all this year, even i met better people that i met in this year than people I had met a few years ago. It's weird, i wa

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Time. I've been thinking about what happend 1 year ago. I met a lot of people in all this year, even i met better people that i met in this year than people I had met a few years ago. It's weird, i was talking with my friends and in a moment a lot of pictures or thoughts invade my mind and i realized that it's just 1 year. But in that year a lot of things happend, in 1 year i was thinking about be the best in my team, i was thinking about the university, i was thinking about my friends, that were really cool and i had never thought how would be my life 1 year after. In 1 year a lot of things can be change. I remembered all my mistakes that i've made, and I'm thinking how it will be able to change my life, people that were important to me, now they aren't and it's weird What do you think about it? There are a lot of things that were the best in our lifes, but nobody can't take us back to the day or year that we thought that our life was better. If there are any mistakes, please corrected me

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Time.

I've been thinking about what happened 1 year ago. I met a lot of people in all this year; i even met better people that i met in this year than the people I had met a few years ago.
It's weird, i was talking with my friends and in a moment a lot of pictures or thoughts invaded my mind and i realized that it's just been 1 year. But in that year a lot of things happened, in 1 year i was thinking about be the best in my team, i was thinking about the university, i was thinking about my friends, all things that were really cool and i had never thought how they would be my life 1 year later.
In 1 year a lot of things can be change.
I remembered all the mistakes that I've made, and I'm thinking how it will be able to change my life. people that were important to me, now they aren't, and it's weird
What do you think about it?
There are a lot of things that were the best in our lives, but nobody can't take us back to the day or year that we thought that our life was better.

If there are any mistakes, please corrected me

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Hi Adrian,

Good job on this writing; you use a lot of complicated grammar! Well done. Let me know if you have any mistakes about the changes I've made. Keep up the good work!

Best,

Julie

yellow for spelling/grammar mistakes

green for phrases which I have tried to sound more natural.

Hope the changes make sense. If you need any more help please don't hesitate to send me a message.

Time.

I've been thinking about what happened a (sounds slightly more natural than using one)year ago. I met a lot of people in all this year, even i met better people that i met in this year than people I had met a few years ago. these people might even be better than those I met a few years ago. (what you wrote doesn't quite make sense many because of word order :))
It's weird. I was talking with my friends and in a moment all of a sudden lots of pictures and (or would suggest there was one or the other) thoughts invaded came into my mind and i realized that it's just only been 1 year. But in that year a lot of things have happened. in 1 year i was thinking about be I thought about how I was the best in my team, i was thinking about the university, i was thinking about my friends, who were really cool and how I had never thought how my life had changed in 1 year. would be my life 1 year after.

(I guessed that you were trying to list all the things that happened in the past year?) (no need to include the verb if you are repeating the same one for each item in the list)
In 1 year a lot of things can change. (no need for 'be' when can is followed by another verb eg. I can help you learn English) can be change
I remembered all my mistakes that I've made, and I'm thinking thought about (needs to be same tense as 'remembered for consistency) how it will be able to they (mistakes?) can change your (speaking generally) life. I thought about people that were important to me who aren't anymore. now they aren't and it's weird
What do you think about it?
There are a lot of things that were, at one point in time, the best things in our lives. But nobody can't take us back to the day or year that when we thought our life was better.

If there are any mistakes, please corrected me

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