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Translation homework from Swedish - Does this sound enough "english"? The Nordic Bath ritual Saunas and cold baths are fundamental in the Nordic bath culture. At the first Swedish bathhouses founded 1269, the bath servants used birch twigs to give customers' skin a fresh and pink tone. But in 1726 the bathhouses was closed because of their bad reputation and not opening again until the 1820s. Our Nordic Bath is a light, relaxing and respectful ritual that relaxes the muscles, detoxes the body and improves the blood flow. This is how it works: Sit back in the sauna and take deep breaths of the birch scent. Have a quick plunge in the cold pool or take a cold bucket shower and then do it again so many times you feel like. The more the better! This treatment is perfect to close your pores and strenghten your immune system. Do you wish some more luxury? Well, in the De Luxe Nordic Bath ritual our own swedish ecological pruducts are also included. If you prefer a common spa experience, try our 32-degree pool which is both UV and sand filtrated. Here you can also find a steam bath and a hydrotherapy pool. Please note that the beachwear is sold at the reception. The De Luxe Nordic Bath ritual Get away from everything or take some friends with you for a pleasant time. The combination of sauna and cold water, scrub and nutritional face mask are regenerting and revitalizing experiences. You can apply these products by yourselves at your own pace following our instructions, but remember to start by dry brushing properly. Aside from the entrance, this experience includes a glass of Champagne and Grand Hotel's home made chocolate pralines, a traditional Scandinavian cranberry body scrub, a healty face mask and a curative hair mask. Finish up by experiencing a fantastic message candle and take home with you an ecological dry skin brush. Duration: as long as it takes but count on at least 2 hours (only Monday to Thursday) Price: 1450 SEK or 600 SEK if in addition to the treatment

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Translation homework from Swedish - Does this sound enough "english" natural?

The Ritual of Nordic Baths ritual

Saunas and cold baths are fundamental in the to Nordic bath culture. At The first Swedish bathhouses were started in founded 1269. the bath servants Bath attendants rubbed used birch twigs to give customers' on bathers to give their skin a fresh and pink tone. But in However, in 1726 the bathhouses was were closed because of their bad reputation due to illicit activities happening in there and not reopened ing again until the 1820s.


Our Nordic style baths is a are light, relaxing and a respectedful ritual that relaxes the muscles, detoxifies the body and improves the blood circulation flow.

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Translation homework from Swedish - Does this sound English enough ?

The Nordic Bath Ritual

Saunas and cold baths are fundamental in/to the Nordic bath culture. At When the first Swedish bathhouses *were founded in 1269, the bath servants used birch twigs to give customers' skin a fresh and pink tone, but in 1726 the bathhouses were closed because of their bad reputation and *didn't open ing again until the 1820s.
Our Nordic Bath is a light, relaxing and respectful ritual that relaxes the muscles, detoxes the body and improves the blood flow.
This is how it works:
Sit back in the sauna and take deep breaths of the birch scent.
Have a quick plunge in the cold pool or take a cold bucket shower and then do it again so many times you feel like. ( feel like what? You need a word after 'like', for example ... "you feel like heaven" , or omit the " like" : ' ... until you feel great.')

The more the better!
This treatment is perfect to close your pores and strenghten your immune system.
Do you want some more luxury? Well, in the De Luxe Nordic Bath ritual our own Swedish ecological pruducts are also included.
If you prefer a basic spa experience, try our 32-degree pool which is both UV and sand filtrated. Here you can also find a steam bath and a hydrotherapy pool. Please note that the beachwear is sold at the reception.


The De Luxe Nordic Bath ritual

Get away from everything or take some friends with you for a pleasant time. The combination of sauna and cold water, scrub and nutritional face mask are regenerating and revitalizing experiences. You can apply these products by yourself at your own pace following our instructions, but remember to start by dry brushing properly. Aside from the entrance, ('entrance' is confusing here) this experience includes a glass of champagne and Grand Hotel's home made chocolate pralines, a traditional Scandinavian cranberry body scrub, a healthy face mask and a curative hair mask. Finish up by experiencing a fantastic message candle and take home with you an ecological dry skin brush.

Duration: as long as it takes, but count on at least 2 hours (only Monday thru Thursday)
Price: 1450 SEK or 600 SEK for additional treatments

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The De Luxe Delux Nordic Bath ritual

Here in this package, you can get away from everything or take some come with friends with you for a pleasant time for a great bonding. The combination of sauna and cold water, scrub and nutritional face mask are will regenerateing and revitalizeing experiences you back in no time. You can Apply these  our products by yourselves at your leisure.  Instructions are always on hand. own pace following our instructions, but remember to First and foremost is to start by dry brushing. Then  properly. Aside from the entrance, this experience includes a glass of Champagne and some of the Grand Hotel's home made homemade chocolate pralines. There will be a traditional Scandinavian cranberry body scrub; a healthy face mask and a curative hair mask will be applied. Finish up by experiencing a fantastic message candle and take home As a parting gift, a we have a aromatic candle with you an ecological dry skin brush for you.

Duration: as long as it takes but count on at least 2 hours (only Monday to Thursday)
Price: 1450 SEK or 600 SEK if in addition to the treatment

We are opened on Mondays to Thursdays and each session lasts for at least two hours.  For a price of 1450 SEK your body will thank you.  600 SEK in addition if you require more service. I am guessing.  I don't understand the last part of your sentence.


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Andrea, I am a native English speaker from America, Jeff is not a native speaker, and I warn you that his 'corrections' are FAR WORSE than your original document. Your document is easily understandable, but it does have some grammar and spelling errors and improvements that can be made. Remember names of countries and languages are always capitalized in English writing.
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This is how it works: To maximize your Swedish Sauna,

Sit back in the sauna and relax.  Take Inhale the rich fragrance deep breaths of the birch scent. Then take Have a quick plunge in the cold pool or take have a cold shower bucket shower with you and splash its cold water as often as then do it again so many times you feel like. The more you do it the more refreshing you become the better!

This way,  treatment is perfect to close your pores will be tightened in harmony and strenghten your immune system strengthened. You need choice words to advertise!


Do you wish some more luxury More pampering ? Well, in the De Luxe You may find our delux Nordic Bath package comes with  ritual our own Swedish ecological pruducts are also included.


If you prefer a common spa experience, try our 32-degree pool which is both UV and sand filtrated. Here you can  will also find a steam baths and a hydrotherapy pool. Please note that In case you may have forgotten your the beachwear, our  is sold at the reception has the latest trends to suit your taste.



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