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Review on Justice League Honestly, I was really feeling disappointed after watching the movie Justice League. The story did not go on very fluently and no surprise. I firstly thought the return of superman would be very surprising and heroic, however it just happened when the electricity was put into the mother box. And the action part of it was not good as that in superman:man of steel, not mention that of BVS. I hope the next DC movie will be much better. For Justice league, it only shows the facade of the core the DC.

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Honestly, I was really feeling feeling really disappointed after watching the movie Justice League. The story did not go on very fluently flow well and there were no surprises. I firstly At first, I thought the return of Superman would be very surprising and heroic, however it just happened when the electricity was put into the mother box. And the action part of it was not as good as that in superman:man of steel, not to mention that of BVS. I hope the next DC movie will be much better. For Justice League, it only shows the facade of the core the of DC.

This is really good! Just a few missing particles, and a few tweaks to make it sound more natural. Everything makes sense to me except the last sentence — do you mean that Justice League doesn't show the "real" DC? 

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