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How should Parents Help Children to Become Independent?

Nowadays, more and more parents like to help their chirdren to do in everything.  For example, parents send the chirdren to school ,then chirdren have never not allowed to walked alone by themselves in primary schools 1;After school they don't need to any housework, just play more games or do a little homework.  They don't are not concerned about how to life by themsleves living independently.  They just depend by they on their parents! When they grow up, they don't know how to cook, how to do housework, how to solve problems, how to take care themselves and
others.

Anyways,Parents should help children to be independent.  This is  which is very important to for their lives.  Firstly,Children do be taught to do something easily by themselves,when they are younger2. such as simple housework and small job.  Secondly,when they across some problems, thinking by themselves don't help them at oncethey should learn how to think for themselves. But parents can Give them ideas on how to solve is prefect it.The last oneLastly, teaching them how to have care and concern about for others.  Parents are the good should be role models for them.
If parents could do that,the when the children will feel extremely grateful.because it is very useful for their lives to be independent.

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If parents could do that, when the children grow up they will feel be extremely grateful.  because It is very useful important for their lives them to be independent.

1.  Just a comment.  I don't know about in China...  It's is always good thing that children should not walk alone by themselves even in schools.  This is for safety reasons.  Intrusion by outsiders, internal school bullying etc.  I always say safety in numbers.

2.  This is redundant since children is defined to be young.

My mistakes... my mind isn't working as I just woke up.   The sentences should be,

""such as simple housework and small jobs"

"Secondly, when they come across problems..."

"Give them ideans on how to solve them".