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Advertisements, mainly focusing on brands or products, play an indispensable role in our life. There is no need for me to put any emphasis on positive economic effects contributed by advertising. However, whether advertising are beneficial to society without any negative impact is worth discussing. The following paragraphs will analyze these both two views and present my own opinion.
For those who claim that advertising influences economy beneficially, the reasons are two-fold. Firstly, advertisement give rise to the employment rate. Advertising is a immense industry which provide the society with a great number of work opportunities .According to the Ministry of Commerce of PRC, over thirty thousand advertising companies have built up, offering approximately five hundred thousand occupations. As the employment rate is increasing, advertising industry indirectly promote economy. Secondly, advertisements bring growth on foreign trade. For the people who live oversea, advertising is the main information source of Chinese commodities and encourage them to purchase goods from China, which contributes to the rise of Chinese economy.
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Are there some mistakes in this essay?
Advertisements, mainly focusing on brands or products, play an indispensable role in our life. There is no need for me to put any emphasis on the positive economic effects contributed by advertising. However, whether advertising are is (<--"Advertisements" 是复词,但是 "advertising" 是单词。) beneficial to society without any negative impact is worth discussing. The following paragraphs will analyze these both two views and present my own opinion.For those who claim that advertising influences the economy beneficially, the reasons are two-fold. Firstly, advertisement gives rise to the employment rate. Advertising is an immense industry which that provides the society with a great number of work opportunities. According to the Ministry of Commerce of the PRC, over thirty thousand advertising companies have been built up, offering approximately five hundred thousand occupations. As the employment rate is increasing, the advertising industry indirectly promotes the economy. Secondly, advertisements bring growth on in foreign trade. For the people who live overseas, advertising is the main information source of for Chinese commodities and encourages them to purchase goods from China, which contributes to the rise of the Chinese economy.
This is very well written, Vania. All mistakes are minor ones that can be corrected with a little more practice =)
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"When a ruler who wishes to make his nation prosperous and great, devotes his attention only to questions of finance and revenue, he is surely under the influence of some base and ignoble person. When such a base and ignoble person directs the affairs of a nation, even though he be a man of ability, calamities will follow. This is what is meant by saying that what really makes a nation prosperous is not wealth and material prosperity, but honor and duty." 大學
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