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Sharing Economy In China, there are more and more people choosing not to take taxis, instead using DiDi DaChe(China's Uber), or using bike-sharing schemes to get around. People are not staying in hotels when they travel, instead adopting Airbnb to stay with locals. It's safe to say sharing economy is in the process of changing our way of life. Sharing economy brings convenience to us, such as, Airbnb provides us with an opportunity to experience the actual lives of the locals. Bike-sharing is also very convenient.People can ride these bikes to go to and from work, and it is good for the environment. However, sharing economy is not perfect, it also brings with a few problems, for example, some areas with bike-sharing schemes have had bikes stolen or damaged, and once in Taiwan, after checking in , a couple unexpectedly discovered, there are some surveillance both in bathroom and bed room. What do you think of sharing economy?

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The Sharing Economy

In China, there are more and more people choosing not to take taxis, instead using DiDi DaChe (China's Uber) or using bike-sharing schemes to get around. People are not staying in hotels when they travel, instead adopting Airbnb to stay with locals. It's safe to say that the sharing economy is in the process of changing our way of life.

The sharing economy brings convenience to us. such as For instance/For example, Airbnb provides us with an opportunity to experience the actual lives of the locals. Bike-sharing is also very convenient; people can ride these bikes to go to and from work, and it is good for the environment. However, the sharing economy is not perfect; it also brings with a few problems. For example, some areas with bike-sharing schemes have had bikes stolen or damaged, and once in Taiwan, after checking in , a couple unexpectedly discovered that there are were some surveillance cameras both in both the bathroom and bedroom after checking into their Airbnb. (<--在这句话里，这段移到后面更好听。)
What do you think of the sharing economy?

Nicely written, Cherry. I think the sharing economy is still in its early stages of development, so of course there will be problems. When it becomes more widely accepted, we can expect it to improve =)

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