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I have always wondered about buying a fancy skateboard which I found in the mailing catalog. One day I decided to buy it. When it was delivered to me, I
used it right away. Unfortunately, after an hour of using I was disappointed because when I tried to do a skateboarding trick, it broke in half. Although it broke in half it has many scratches which spoiled the original effect of the skateboard. I immediately called the deliverer. I had told him about the whole situation. He answered me that I had broken the skateboard by myself and I had used it in the wrong way. I rang off and I was so pissed off.
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I have always wondered about buying a fancy skateboard which I found in the mailing catalog. One day, I decided to buy it. When it was delivered to me, I used it right away. Unfortunately, after an hour of using it, I was disappointed. because When I tried to do a skateboarding trick, it broke in half. Although it broke in half, it has many scratches which spoiled the original effect of the skateboard. I immediately called the deliverer. I had told him about the whole situation. He answered informed(Technically "answered" is not wrong; however, the words "informed" or "told" would be more appropriate for the situation) me that I had broken the skateboard by myself, and I had used it in the wrong way. I rang off (hung up), and I was so pissed off.(I'm assuming that "rang off" is meaning, "ending the call out of frustration". In the United States, we say "I hung up". To ask someone if they ended the call [without saying goodbye], we would say, "Did you hang up on me?")
Overall, wonderful job!! :)
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