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Dry air is horrible It´s getting so cold even in Tokyo and I hate it because it makes me become lazy and feel like I don´t want to do anything. Moreover, it makes my skin terrible. I engaged in beauty consultant in back home and have to think of how to explain each products. I´d like to practice how to explain an efficacy of one of products. Like I say, dry is really bad for your skin and it makes your skin hard and weak. And the hard skin wouldn´t be able to absorb any lotions and weak skins absorb rays from sun and polluted air well so it will be earlier to get old. Don´t you think that´s so horrible? So if you don´t want to get old so early, you have to keep your skin be moistened. One of skincare series that we have is very good for moisture. This series make a tons of arms around a cell so they would catch water every second and the cell would be surrounded by the water so your entire skin would be moistened. Moreover, the water come inside of the cell and always move so your skin would spark reflecting lights. Let's say you go to the sea and the sunset comes and the waves Illuminated the sunset and the surface of the sea look spark and very beautiful. Such a thing will happen in your skin as well!! What do you think of it?

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Dry air is horrible

It´s getting really so cold even in Tokyo and I hate it because it makes me become lazy and feel like I don´t want to do anything.
Moreover, it makes my skin terrible.
I am a engaged in beauty consultant in back home and have to think of how to explain different each products to customers.


Here I´d like to practice how to explain an efficacy of one of products to an customer:

Like I said say, dry weather is really bad for your skin, and it makes it your skin  brittle hard and weak.
And the Hard Dry skin has difficulty wouldn´t be able to absorbing any lotions and brittle weak skins absorb rays from sun and polluted air which ages youwell so it will be earlier to get old. Don´t you think that´s so horrible?
So If you don´t want to get old so early, you have to keep your skin moisturized be moistened.

One of skincare series that we have is very good for moisturizing.
This series make a tons of arms around a cell so they would catch water every second and the cell would be surrounded by the water so your entire skin would be moistened. (Not sure what you're trying to say here, so I didn't correct it)


Also Moreover, the water come inside of the cell and always move so your skin (also not sure what your trying to say here) would spark reflectsing lights. Kind of like how when Let's say you go to the sea during and the sunset comes and the waves are Illuminated by the sunset which makes and the surface of the sea look sparkly and very beautiful. This Such a thing will happen to in your skin as well!! What do you think of it?

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You could say it makes your skin radiant.

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