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I don't like titles Today's a rainy day, what's quite weird because it's almost summer (in some days) and this last week have been pretty hot - like a steam room -, but that's okay, it's Brazil and everything changes in the blink of an eye, including and mainly, the climate. This last month was as a collection of new days for me, being at university is very different from high school, the coincidence between them is that I find myself full of homework to do and books to read, and I just wanna watch series, by the way.

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I don't like titles

Today's a rainy day. That is quite weird because it's almost summer (on some days) and this last week has been pretty humid - like a steam room -, but that's okay, it's Brazil and everything changes in the blink of an eye, including and mainly, the climate. This last month was as a collection of new days for me. Being at university is very different from high school. Their similarity is that I find myself full of homework to do and books to read, and I just wanna watch series, by the way.

Very well written!

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I don't like titles

Today's a rainy day, what's which is quite weird because it's almost summer (in some days) and this last week have has been pretty hot - like a steam room -. But that's okay, it's Brazil and everything changes in the blink of an eye, including, and mainly, the climate. This last month was as like a collection of new days for me*. Being at university is very different from high school, the coincidence** between them is that I find myself full of homework to do and books to read, and I just wanna watch tv series, by the way instead.

* this phrase doesn't sound very natural here. It might be better to just be simple and say "this last month has been new/different for me" or "a new experience for me"

** This word doesn't fit here. Do you mean 'the difference between them' or 'the similarity between them'?

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