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Disneyland
Approximately 4 months ago I went to Disneyland.I had been waiting for that since I was in High School.
It was really great.
I woke up at 3:30 am to take a shower, I called an Uber's driver to pick me up the place where the buses had left.
I was talking with my friends all the way road, so it was relaxing. When we got to Disneyland I changed my clothes so I left the bus and entered to Disney.
I remember that I was very happy because I love Disneyland and it's a was a beautiful place to me.
Also, I remember that I lost my overnight bag in a game, I think it was in Indian Jones, so when I realized that I had lost my overnight bag a friend of mine told to a worker " He lost his backpack." In that moment I was sad, but a few minutes later a person appeared with my overnight bag, so I was fine.
Oh also I could enter to Adventure California Park because with my ticket I could was to enter to both parks.
Disneyland
Approximately 4 months ago I went to Disneyland. ("Approximately" is good but "About" is less formal.)I had been waiting for that to go there since I was in High School.
It was really great.
I woke up at 3:30 am to take a shower, I called to the uber's driver to pick me up to the place where buses had left at the bus-stop.
I was talking with my friends all on the road, so it was relaxing,when we got to Disneyland I changed my clothes so I left the bus and entered to Disneyland (The last part of this sentence is weird, but it is correct.)
I remember that I was very happy because I love Disneyland, it's a beatiful place to me.
Also I remember that I lost my overnight bag in a game, I think it was in The Indian Jones one, so when I realized that I had lost my overnight bag a friend of mine told to a worker " He lost his backpack" In that moment I was sad, but a few minutes later a person appeared with my overnight bag, so I was fine.
Oh also I could also enter to The Adventure California Park because my ticket was to enter to both parks.
If there are any mistakes, can you please tell me?
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