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The aim of this research is discover the effect that some type of images have on the extent of attention of university students to online graphic messages that expose the social-ecological crisis. In order to achieve this end, the participants will be exposed to graphic advertisements of environmental responsibility and their attention will be measured through web analytics programs. The methodology used is natural-type quasi-experiment, in which several environmental advertising messages are presented to the participants and the subjects are instructed to observe the ad and decide when they want to stop viewing it. The data obtained were analyzed statistically with the Student's T test and ANOVA.
Among the results highlights the extent of attention to the types of messages with shock aesthetics, in addition to the announcements that involve the recipient, identifying themselves with the message and its characters. In terms of the effectiveness of the graphic messages that address the social-ecological crisis, the images that capture the attention are those that contain elements that impact and involve the receivers.
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The aim of this research is to discover the effect that some types of images have on the extent of attention of university students to online graphic messages that expose the social-ecological crisis. In order to achieve this end, the participants will be exposed to graphic advertisements of environmental responsibility and their attention will be measured through web analytics programs. The methodology used is a natural-type quasi-experiment, in which several environmental advertising messages are presented to the participants and the subjects are instructed to observe the ad and decide when they want to stop viewing it. The data obtained were will be analyzed statistically with the Students' T test and ANOVA.Among The results highlights the extent of attention to the types of messages with shock aesthetics, in addition to the announcements that involve the recipient, identifying themselves with the message and its characters. In terms of the effectiveness of the graphic messages that address the social-ecological crisis, the images that capture the attention are those that contain elements that impact and involve the receivers.
Excellent writing, I've made a few small corrections and suggestions to sound more natural.
The use of the word 'data' as a plural would normally require the verb 'be' to be conjugated in the plural form as you have done, however it is more commonly used in the singular. eg, the data obtained was analyzed. The latter is technically incorrect but with extensive use, it is now commonly considered correct. The word data has, over time, become a non-countable noun like 'money'. eg, the money 'was' spent.' Of course if you are writing a formal paper and your readers are pompous intellects, you may want to stay with the former.
In any case, I suggest changing the past tense 'were' to 'will be' in order to be consistent with the second sentence in the first paragraph. 'the participants will be exposed to graphic advertisements'
Also, the spelling of the word 'analyze' is the American spelling, so if your readers are Americans, you're fine. If your readers are from all other English speaking countries, they will probably cringe. :)
I hope this is helpful.
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