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My new apartment Right now i’m moving to a new address because it’s near to my school. Before I lived with my family, but now I can have a privacy. By the way my new apartment is in the same town as my family, so I can visit them whenever I want. The space of my apartment is small, in spite of it it’s very comfortable because I don’t need to use more time to clean up and I’m trying not to be a hoarder. When I know I’ve a small space I’d buy less things and trow away unnecessary things. My new place is a student apartments. I’ve a roommate, but we don’t come across often, because she lives there only on weekdays. She’s not there on holidays. On the other hand I go there only on holidays. My roommate seems like a bad person who worship satanic, but we come along. I’ll live there until next year in august, if I don’t have another thought.

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My New Apartment

Recently, I’ve moved to live in a new address because it’s closer to my school. Before then, I just lived with my family, so now I can have some privacy. By the way, my new apartment is located in the same town as my family’s place so I can still visit them whenever I want. The space of my apartment is small, but in spite of that it is very convenient because I don’t need to waste a lot of time cleaning it up and it forces me not to be a hoarder. Since I know that I’ve a small space, I buy fewer things, as well as throw away unnecessary items. In case you were wondering, yes, my new place is a student’s apartment. I’ve a roommate, but we don’t interact or interfere with each other often as she only lives there on the weekdays. Also, she will not be there on holidays, whereas on the other hand, I expect to usually spent most of my holidays there. My roommate seems like a bad person who worships Satan, but we somehow manage to get along. I’ll live there until next August if no problems develop or I don’t have other thoughts.

Hi Marchell. Good job. Whatever changes I’ve made were merely done for clarity and to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. If I’ve misinterpreted your thoughts, please accept my apologies in advance. I hope that this help you. J.

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