My weekend
I have work on weekdays, so always I have day off in the weekend. Last weekend, I spent all day long reading comic books which my friend let me borrow. The comic was about high school's students playing basket ball, but they are very weak. Even though they are weak, they are trying to be the strongest team of Japan. I really liked reading because I was playing basket ball, so I could understand their feeling, how practice was hard, relationship of team members and so on. I still reading that comics, so looking forward to see the next story.
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My weekend
I work on weekdays, so I always have the weekend off. Last weekend, I spent all day reading comic books that my friend let me borrow. The comics were about high school students playing basketball, but they are very weak. Even though they are weak, they are trying to be the strongest team in Japan. I really liked reading them because I play basketball, so I relate to their feelings, how practice was hard, the relationships between team members, and so on. I'm still reading the comics and looking forward to the next story.0
My Weekend
I work only weekdays, so I always have the weekends off. Thus, last weekend, I spent both of my off days reading the comic books which my friend let me borrow. The comics are about a high school basketball team, but one which plays poorly. Even though they do not play very well, they are still hoping to be the best team in Japan. I really liked reading about this because I, myself, play basketball, so I could easily relate to their situation. I understood their feelings, how practice was hard, as well as the relationships between the team members and so on. I am still reading that series of comic books, so I am looking forward to enjoying the next issue!
Hi Miki. Good job! Whatever changes I've made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that this helps you. J.
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My weekend
I have work only on weekdays, so always I have day off in the weekend I always have the weekend off. Last weekend, I spent all day long reading comic books which my friend let me borrow. The comic was about high school's students playing basket ball, but they are very weak. Even though they are weak, they are trying to be the strongest team of in Japan. I really liked reading it because I was playing used to play basket ball, so I could understand their feelings; how practice was hard, the relationships of team members and so on. I'm still reading that comics, soI'm looking forward to seeing the next story.Want to progress faster?
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