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It was a hard day Today, I take an exam for my job. It's very important for me because if I pass this exam, I will be a better rank. So, I woke up early this morning and after a quick breakfast I drove to another city to take this exam. It was difficult but not impossible. This exam had two parts. One in the morning and another on in the afternoon. I think I did well but not perfect. After that, I went back at home and I bought a big cake because of my efforts for this exam. It was yummy but after than I didn't hungry anymore. Thank you for you corrections my friends.

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It was a hard day.

Today, I took an exam for my job. It's very important for me because, if I pass this exam, I will be a better ranked (or, 'I will have a higher ranking'). So, I woke up early this morning and, after a quick breakfast, I drove to another city to take the exam.
It was difficult but not impossible. This exam had two parts; one in the morning and another one in the afternoon. I think I did well but not perfect.
After that, I went back at home and I bought a big cake because of my efforts for this exam. It was yummy, and after eating the cake, I wasn't hungry anymore.

Thank you for you corrections my friends.


Great job, Sébastien! I'm an English teacher, so feel free to message me if you need more help.
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It was a hard day

Today, I took an exam for my job. It's very important for me because if I pass this exam, I will be in a better position . So, I woke up early this morning and after a quick breakfast I drove to another city to take this exam.
It was difficult but not impossible. This exam had two parts. One in the morning and another in the afternoon. I think I did well but not perfectly. 
After that, I went back home and I bought a big cake because of my efforts for this exam. It was yummy but after than I didn't hungry anymore.

Thank you for you corrections my friends.

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