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Entry #2 Nov 14th けさわたしはしごとにいきました。それから、わたしはテストのべんきょしをはじめました。クラスで日本人のがくせいにあった。わたしたちはいしょにに日本ご話すをれんしゅします。

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Entry #2 Nov 14th

けさわたしはしごとにいきました。

I think it is better to say

”わたしはけさしごとにいきました。"

Your original sentence focuses on  けさ(this morning) as if something special happened in the morning, but I don't think that was your intention. 

それから、わたしはテストのべんきょし べんきょう をはじめました。

You don't need "の” after ”テスト” ”テスト勉強” means studying for an exam.

クラスで日本人のがくせいにあった  あいました。

Be careful with mixing formal and informal words.

わたしたちはいしょ いっしょ に に 日本ご  を  話すをれんしゅうをします した。

"します" is a present tense word, but you are talking about your past event, so you should you "しました” instead. 

Overall, I think you did a great job!

I would like you to be careful with mixing verb tenses and formal/informal words. I also recommend you to review the usage of the particle を (o/wo). 

Let me know if you have any questions!

Cheers,

Miharu

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