Writing an interest I'm interested in travel. I usually travel on my vacation. My vacations are usually in March. I like to go to tourist spots, to get to know new cultures, night parties and typical

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Pedro Portilho

Writing an interest I'm interested in travel. I usually travel on my vacation. My vacations are usually in March. I like to go to tourist spots, to get to know new cultures, night parties and typical foods. I went to Argentina and I love traveling to other countries. Next year, I want to visit the United States. This year I took the opportunity to apply my American visa in São Paulo during my holidays where I visited the cities of southern and southeastern Brazil, like Rio de Janeiro, São Paulo, Curitiba, Florianópolis, Porto Alegre and Gramado. I really love to travel.

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I'm interested in travel. I usually travel on my vacation. My vacations are usually in March. I like to go to tourist spots, to get to know* new cultures, night parties and typical foods. I went to Argentina and I love traveling to other countries. Next year, I want to visit the United States. This year I took the opportunity to take my American visa** in São Paulo during my holidays where I visited the cities of southern and southeastern Brazil, like Rio de Janeiro, São Paulo, Curitiba, Florianópolis, Porto Alegre and Gramado. I really love to travel.

Very good work.

*=I guess you're translating "conhecer". If have a new "conhecimento" you usually use a phrase like "I am getting to know São Paulo" or "I am learning about Portuguese culture" or "I am getting acquainted with your cousins". Logo que você conheça-os podes dizer "I know São Paulo", "I know all about Portuguese culture" or "I know your cousins"

**=I'm not sure what you mean here. Why would you need an American Visa to visit São Paulo?

Hey Pedro, here are my corrections - hope it helps! :-)

Writing an interest

I'm interested in travel. I usually travel during my vacation. My vacations are usually in March. I like to go to tourist spots, to understand new cultures, experience night parties and typical foods. I went to Argentina and I love traveling to other countries. Next year, I want to visit the United States. This year, (inserted a comma) I applied for my American visa in São Paulo during my holidays. I also visited the cities of southern and southeastern Brazil, like Rio de Janeiro, São Paulo, Curitiba, Florianópolis, Porto Alegre and Gramado. I really love to travel.

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