missing you
the best missing is i know where you are,but i can not visit you at will.
you are not at the end of world,however,i found you are inapproachable.
missing you,you seem like living in my dream.
stearing at sky,i feel the most shining star in the universe is you.
where the star is unnamed?where you are.
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Every thing means something.
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thank you for the correction.i can totally understand what you mean.my native language is chinese.the biggest reason caused me make so many mistakes is the code's discrepancy of language between chinese and english i think.thanks again.
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Missing You
The best part about missing you is that I know where you are; even though I cannot visit you at will.
You are not at the end of the world, I find you unapproachable.
Missing you, you seem like inhabitating in my dream.
Staring at the sky, I feel the brightest star1 is you.
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1. Stars by definition are in the universe. So the words, "in the universe" is redundant.
2 Can't decipher what you are trying to say. Write in your native tongue so that those who knows your language can do a better job in their correction.
missing you
you are not at the end of world,however,i found you are inapproachable.
missing you,you seem like living in my dream.
stearing at sky,i feel the most shining star in the universe is you.
where the star is unnamed?where you are.
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