My last boss,Jun 01, 2011
Today I want to talk something about my last boss and my last company, because I heard a bad news recently. My boss bankrupted the company, caused by gamble! Although he is the friend of my father,I don't like he .He is gambler ,always go to Macao for gambling.Sometime borrowed hefty cash from the feneration. The last time,he borrowed again and lost more than ten million in gamble. He couldn't pay the debts,so that the company was bankrupted and he ran away.Finally the government auctioned the company and paid for the employees. I thought that he has no responsibility ,how about his family and how about the employees.He is not a real man.
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I shall not repeat corrections since Buraian had a good job in correcting your grammar and spelling. However I think your English level is quite good. So I shall polish your essay so that you can see how better it can be better expressed and you can improve :)
My Previous1 Boss
Today I wanted to talk about my boss from the previous company that I worked for. There were some bad news I heard recently. That boss had bankrupted the company due to his gambling debts. Although he is a friend of my father, I never did like him2. A gambler he is always, going to Maccau, borrowing hefty sums3 from the coporation. The last time he borrowed more than 10 million and lost them all. Unable to recoup, his company was declared bankrupt. He ran away into hiding. Finally the company was auctioned off by the government and the employees were paid. He has no reponsibility3. He cares not for his family nor his employees. He is no real man.4
1. Although we understand what you mean, "last" also means "最後一個", 即你從此之後就唔去做工嗎
2. What you wrote can also say that you don't like him is because he bankrupted the company. You don't like him because he was always gambling.
3. There is no such thing as cash being hefty or not. The are acutally small, light weighted and convenient. However there is such a thing as hefty sums of cash.
4. The way you say can mean that he is a puppet - not real like Pinnochio. "He is no real man" or "He is not a man" is an expression meaning 佢唔係大丈夫.
My Previous1 Boss
Today I wanted to talk about my boss from the previous company that I worked for. There were some bad news I heard recently. That boss had bankrupted the company due to his gambling debts. Although he is a friend of my father, I never did like him2. A gambler he is always, going to Maccau, borrowing hefty sums3 from the coporation. The last time he borrowed more than 10 million and lost them all. Unable to recoup, his company was declared bankrupt. He ran away into hiding. Finally the company was auctioned off by the government and the employees were paid. He has no reponsibility3. He cares not for his family nor his employees. He is no real man.4
1. Although we understand what you mean, "last" also means "最後一個", 即你從此之後就唔去做工嗎
2. What you wrote can also say that you don't like him is because he bankrupted the company. You don't like him because he was always gambling.
3. There is no such thing as cash being hefty or not. The are acutally small, light weighted and convenient. However there is such a thing as hefty sums of cash.
4. The way you say can mean that he is a puppet - not real like Pinnochio. "He is no real man" or "He is not a man" is an expression meaning 佢唔係大丈夫.
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