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today's diary (2017-10-30) it's new start working today! but i'm tired because yesterday, i went to my new apartment which i bought.. haha! I'm so excited to live in there because in korea, it's too hard to buy your own house. it's too expensive.. I want to live there full of life with my wife and my daughter who will be born next year.. for that, I will hard working further more, hahahaha

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today's diary (2017-10-30)

New working day has begun! But i'm tired because yesterday[without comma] I went to (->moved to) my new apartment which I had bought.. haha! (because you refer to action executed before other action in the past)
I'm so excited to live in there because in korea, it's very hard to buy your own house. it's too expensive..
I want to live there life to the fullest, together with my wife and my daughter who will be born next year.
for that, I will work even harder, hahahaha

I did not correct everything because I didn't know what exactly you wanted to say.


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