Potato's Diary:)
I am in the my university now..
It was rainy day and bit cold day today.!
Well, Translate this profile. It is already I did from Japanese to English.
Is there any mistakes?
dream: Become a Dlphin trainer
Loves: Play at outside with friends
I want to became your friend and want to play with you!
dream: Become a movie director
Loves: drowing and dogs
I want to become your friend that come from all over the world.
dream: Become a soccor plyer and watch maker
Loves: playing soccer and yo-yo.
I want to become your friend and have fun with you all.
This summer I am planning to go to Canada.
I’m so exciting:)
Hope to this plan goes well !
I need to go overseas. I want to reave Japan for a while.
Because Im too busy in study...it is too boring life for me:(
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Potato's Diary:)
I am atIt
Well, translate this profile. It is already
Are there any mistakes?
Dream: Become a Dolphin trainer
Loves: Playing
I want to became your friend and want to play with you!
Dream: Become a movie director
Loves: drawing and dogs
I want to become your friend that come from all over the world.
Dream: Become a soccer player and watch maker
Loves: Playing soccer and yo-yo. << You are correct here :P
I want to become your friend and have fun with you all.
This summer I am planning to go to Canada.
I’m so excited:)
Hope
I need to go overseas. I want to leave Japan for a while.
Because Im too busy
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