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Potato's Diary:) I am in the my university now.. It was rainy day and bit cold day today.! Well, Translate this profile. It is already I did from Japanese to English. Is there any mistakes? dream: Become a Dlphin trainer Loves: Play at outside with friends I want to became your friend and want to play with you! dream: Become a movie director Loves: drowing and dogs I want to become your friend that come from all over the world. dream: Become a soccor plyer and watch maker Loves: playing soccer and yo-yo. I want to become your friend and have fun with you all. This summer I am planning to go to Canada. I’m so exciting:) Hope to this plan goes well ! I need to go overseas. I want to reave Japan for a while. Because Im too busy in study...it is too boring life for me:(

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Potato's Diary:)

I am at the my university now..
It was rainy day is raining and a bit cold day today.!

Well, translate this profile. It is already I did done from Japanese to English.
Are there any mistakes?


Dream: Become a Dolphin trainer
Loves: Playing at outside with friends << Use to play or playing
I want to became your friend and want to play with you!

Dream: Become a movie director
Loves: drawing and dogs
I want to become your friend that come from all over the world.

Dream: Become a soccer player and watch maker
Loves: Playing soccer and yo-yo. << You are correct here :P
I want to become your friend and have fun with you all.


This summer I am planning to go to Canada.
I’m so excited:)
Hope to this plan goes well !

I need to go overseas. I want to leave Japan for a while.
Because Im too busy in studying...it is such a boring life for me:(

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