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Just a story I often hear people saying that there isn't any afterlife and the only life is here, and it is up to you what it will look like. As for me, I want to believe that there is an afterlife. It is not that it gives any sense, but it gives a hope that it will be possible to see whom I love. I am saying that I want to believe in it, just because I think that our minds can provide us with anything and we are getting what we are thinking about. As for the afterlife, I am inclined to think that it is the place where you are driven by your minds only and only your minds have power to change anything and everything. And I would prefer to have a possibility to reborn and chose the place.

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Just a story

I often hear people others saying that there isn't any no afterlife and the only life is here now.  and It is up to you what it will look like you want to be. As for me, I want to believe that there is an afterlife. It is may make not that it gives any sense, but it gives a us hope that it will be what may be impossible be possible to see whom I love. Don't understant what you say so I am guessing.  I may be wrong. I am saying that I want to believe in it, just because I think that  be more decisive our minds can is capable to provide us with anything and we are getting what we are thinking about wish for. As for the afterlife, I am inclined to think that it is the place where you are driven by your where our minds can bring us to it. only and only your minds have power to change anything and everything. This is understood since it is expressed in the previous sentence.  And I would prefer to have a this possibility to be reborned and choose this place -- my choice to be.
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Overall, your English is very good. I made some grammatical corrections and I changed some of what you wrote based on my assumptions of what you were trying to say.


Just a story

I often hear people say that there isn’t an afterlife, that the only life is here, and it is up to you what it will look like. As for me, I want to believe that there is an afterlife. It may not make any sense, but it offers hope that it will be possible to see loved ones again.

I say that I want to believe in an afterlife because I think that our minds can provide us with anything. We get what we believe in (or “we create what we believe”).

As for the afterlife, I am inclined to think that it is the place where your mind creates and controls everything, and only your mind has the power to change anything and everything. I would prefer to be reborn in a place of my choosing (or “I prefer to be reborn in a place that I choose”).

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