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Water For all the species, water is one of the most essential factors of living. Everyday, we need to drink water for basic metabolism and physical activities. By water, we can keep our environment clean and neat. Furthermore, Unlike Mars, our planet can keep the temperature stable due to the water. However, due to the pollution from most human activities, we are losing natural resources, including clean water. Because the industrial factories release polluted water into rivers and ocean, all creatures in the water accumulate toxic heavy metal in their bodies. Moreover, The animals on the top of the food chain concentrate more harmful ingredience in their bloods, especially humans. Polluted water can makes us sick, weaken our immune system, even might cause cancer. other species of animals also can not escape from the fate. A lot of turtles die of stuffed stomach with small plastic material. Subsequently, bigger marine lives are dying from starving due to the decrease amount of small animals. therefor the variety of the animals is reducing. on the other hand, due to filthy water, we are losing beautiful beach and flash water. How should we do to keep water clean? there are some ways. We can decease using plastic products, refuse to buy stuff from conscienceless company and be active, go to clean beach for everyone.

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For all species, water is an essential requirement for life. Everyday, we need to drink water to maintain basic metabolism and perform physical activities. By keeping our water supplies clean, we can keep our environment clean. Furthermore, unlike Mars, water helps keeps our planet's temperature stable. However, due to pollution from many human activities, our natural resources are threatened--including clean water. Because industry releases polluted water into our rivers and oceans, animal and plant life accumulate toxic heavy metal in their systems. Moreover, animals closer to the top of the food chain concentrate more harmful ingredients in their bodies, especially humans. (This is called biomagnification.) Polluted water can makes us sick, weaken our immune system, and even cause cancer. Other species of animals also can not escape these dangers. Numerous turtles regularly die due to ingesting large quantities of plastic. Subsequently, larger marine life are also dying of starvation due to the decreased amount of smaller marine life--their natural prey. Unfortunately, not only are the variety of animals decreasing. but due to contaminated water, we are also losing beautiful beaches and fresh water. What should we do to keep the Earth's water clean? There are many ways: We can decrease our use of plastic products, refuse to buy products from negligent or polluting companies, and be proactive, informed consumers and citizens. We want a clean beach for everyone!

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