Can someone corrects for me?
For my dear Mr. Ugly
Dear Mr. Ugly.
for all the unspoken words, for missing the words of care and the welcoming smile, for the beard to be made, for each look down after a long day of work, for rest accompanied by conversation and affection, for all times shared. .. it was good to meet you....You are special
with love,
Me
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Can someone corrects for me? For my dear Mr. Ugly
Dear Mr Ugly,for all the unspoken words, the missing endearments and welcoming smile, for the beard to be made, for each lowered look after a long day's work, for rest accompanied by conversation and affection, for all times shared. .. it was good to meet you....You are special
with love,
Me
Very well written!
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It's unclear to me what you mean by 'for the beard to be made'. Are you really talking about a 'beard' -- the hair on a man's face?
A small correction: better to say: "for the missing words of care". Seems like a more parallel construction with 'unspoken words' and 'unwelcoming smile".
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