Could somebody help me correcting this? :)
It is a little objective overview for a curriculum that I'm doing:
"Looking for a seasonal job at a prominent company as Amazon. Motivated by the contact with multi-task and problem solving environments; and the opportunity of bringing excellence in customer service."
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Could somebody help me correcting this? :)
It is a little objective overview for a curriculum that I'm doing:"Looking for a seasonal job at a prominent company such as Amazon. Motivated by the contact desire to work in with multi-tasking and problem-solving environments, and the opportunity to bringing excellence in customer service."
Dear Jairo, looks good! The changes I recommend simply make your statement sounds smoother. Best of luck!
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