Julia Julia was invited to our class from my English teacher. So, She came to my class to be interviewed for us. Julia is from Beijing and She is currently having two weeks vacation in the States. She

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Julia Julia was invited to our class from my English teacher. So, She came to my class to be interviewed for us. Julia is from Beijing and She is currently having two weeks vacation in the States. She spent the first week in New York and New Jersey with some friends, and during these days She is visiting her Teacher Maggie and Maggie’s husband to Chico Ca. The first time she came to the States was in 2013 and visited Los Angeles Ca. after graduating, and this is the first time she is visiting Chico Ca. Maggie and her husband used to be Julia’s English teachers in Beijing, moreover they used to attend a same Christian fellowship, and spent time together. Julia started learning English since middle school, in fact, English was her major when she was in college. She also work as a senior research manager in Beijing for a consultant company. Julia is the only child in her family, and she said that this is very common in China specially for people who were born after 80’s and 90’s. Some of the things that She really likes from her country are food, her friends, and their values. The majority of her friends are Christian and they share same values, this is one of the things that she really care about. In her opinion China is a very dynamic Country with many opportunities for young people.

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Julia

Julia was invited to our class by my English teacher. So, she came to my class to be interviewed by us. Julia is from Beijing and is currently having two weeks vacation in the States. She spent the first week in New York and New Jersey with some friends and later visited her teacher Maggie and Maggie’s husband (in Chicago?). The first time she came to the States was in 2013 when she visited Los Angeles. *That was after graduating, and this is the first time she is visiting Chico Ca.

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Maggie and her husband used to be Julia’s English teachers in Beijing, moreover they used to attend a same Christian fellowship, and spent time together. Julia started learning English since middle school, in fact, English was her major when she was in college. She also work as a senior research manager in Beijing for a consultant company.

Julia is the only child in her family, and she said that this is very common in China specially for people who were born after 80’s and 90’s. Some of the things that She really likes from her country are food, her friends, and their values. The majority of her friends are Christian and they share same values, this is one of the things that she really care about. In her opinion China is a very dynamic Country with many opportunities for young people.

*It is very important to limit one idea to one sentence. I was unclear about what happened when here since multiple ideas (or a single idea?) came into this long sentence. One short sentence= one idea.

Julia

Julia was invited to our class from by my English teacher. So, She came to my class was to be interviewed for by us during class. Julia is from Beijing and She is currently having has two weeks vacationing in the States. She spent the her first week was in New York and New Jersey with some friends, and during these days She is at the same time, visiting her teacher Maggie and Maggie’s her husband to in Chico, CA. The Her first time she came to in the States was in 2013 and had visited Los Angeles Ca. after Since graduation, and this is the would be her first time she is visiting in Chico Ca.

Maggie and her husband used to be wereJulia’s English teachers in Beijing. moreover They used to attended the a same Christian fellowship, and had spent time together. Julia started learning English since middle school. In fact, English was her college major when she was in college. She also now works as a senior research manager in Beijing for a consulting firm.

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Julia

Julia was invited to our class (by) my English teacher. So, (s)he came to my(our) class to be interviewed for(by) us.(Puede decir "so she came.") Julia is from Beijing and (s)he is currently (on) two weeks vacation in the States. She spent the first week in New York and New Jersey with some friends, and (during this time she visited) her (t)eacher Maggie and Maggie’s husband in Chico,CA. The first time she came to the States was in 2013 (after graduating(Normalmente decimos "after graduating high school "o "after graduating college" Debe decir de que ella se graudó). (At that time) (s)he visited Los Angeles, Ca. This is the first time she is visiting Chico, CA.

Maggie and her husband used to be Julia’s English teachers in Beijing, moreover(,) they used to attend (the) same Christian fellowship and spent time together. Julia started learning English (in) middle school, in fact, English was her major in college. She also work(ed) as a senior research manager in Beijing for a consultant company.

Julia is the only child in her family, and she said that this is very common in China (e)specially for people who were born after 80’s and 90’s. Some of the things that (s)he really likes from her country are food, her friends, and their values. The majority of her friends are Christian and they share (the) same values. (Christianity) is one of the things that she really care(s) about. In her opinion China is a very dynamic (c)ountry with many opportunities for young people.

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