这里有青天
呀，我很喜欢这些天是很好的天气。我总是去散步和享受太阳，我也有一高兴大笑容。今天我看到九辆飞机在蓝天，太棒了！啊呀，突然，我看到了两辆飞机几乎相互撞击。
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这里有青天是晴天
呀，我很喜欢这些天是大晴天很好的天气。我总是去散步和享受太阳，我臉上也有一個高兴的大笑容。今天我看到九辆飞机在蓝天，太棒了！啊呀，突然，我看到了两辆飞机几乎快要相互撞击。1
这里有的青天 would be more natural.would be
呀，我很喜欢这些几天, 因为是很好的天气太好了, 。我总是去去散步和享受太阳的温度 or 和丽的阳光 ，我也有一高兴大笑容的脸也非常好。今天我看到天空有九辆架/只飞机在蓝天，太棒了！啊呀，突然吃了一惊，我因为看到了两架好像辆飞机几乎/差点/相互在撞击。Most of the time, direct translation is not the answer but a necessary step for beginners. Hopefully with these changes, you begin to grasp the cultural differences in expressing.
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我很喜欢这些天是很好的天气。我总是去散步和享受太阳，我也有一高兴大笑容。今天我看到九辆飞机在蓝天，太棒了！啊呀，突然，我看到了两辆飞机几乎相互撞击。
we use '架' when count airplant
九架飞机
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呀，我很喜欢这几天的好天气。我总是去散步和享受太阳（it is correct but阳光sounds better for me though），我一高兴就会露出大大的笑容。今天我看到九辆飞机在蓝天，太棒了！啊呀，突然，我看到了两辆飞机差点相互撞击。
Good job!
Normally we don't use “啊呀”，we use “哎呀” instead.
I apologize if I got your actual meanings wrong, there are some sentences that I don't quite understand.
Anyways, you actually saw 2 planes almost crashing?! That's very frightening for me.
Good job!
Normally we don't use “啊呀”，we use “哎呀” instead.
I apologize if I got your actual meanings wrong, there are some sentences that I don't quite understand.
Anyways, you actually saw 2 planes almost crashing?! That's very frightening for me.
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