My friend
Last night，I sent a message to my friend would you like go to Taipei or eat local food at this Saturday? He said okay，it’s shocked me .Long time ago ,he is my best friend,we have same interests and hobby, go outing every week, I was so happy in that time . But some wrong happened , our relationship broken ，we haven’t talk each other for a year.the year is darkness on my college life, I haven’t feel happy since the thing happened. I wish this Saturday is a new start for our relationship.we just have a year that can meet everyday ，I hope everything can go back to the original
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Last night，I sent a message to my friend that said would you like to go to Taipei or eat local food at this Saturday? He said okay, and it’s shocked me. A long time ago, he is was my best friend, we have had the same interests and hobby hobbies, go outing went out every week, and I was so happy in at that time . But some wrong happened**, our relationship broke down, broke and we haven’t talk talked to each other for a year. The past year is has put darkness on my college life, and I haven’t feel felt happy since the thing happened. I wish hope this Saturday is a new start for our relationship. We just have a year that can meet everyday ，I hope everything can go back to the original way things used to be.
Just a note about commas and periods. Commas go at the end of the word, then you have one space before the next word. Periods go at the end of the sentence and then you have two spaces before starting your next sentence.
**some wrong happened
Are you referring to a specific incident or was it several things over a period of time?
You could say for example "My friend wronged me" or "Some bad things happened between us" or simply "Something happened"
**The past year has put darkness on my college life.
A better way to say this would be "This has put a damper on my college life in the past year"
**the thing
This makes it sound more like a specific incident happened between the two of you. You can use the expression "the thing" but it would be more likely to see that expression put in quotes for emphasis
**we just have a year that can meet everyday.
I don't know what you are trying to say here with this sentence. You could just remove this part of the sentence and it would make sense without it there.
A common expression in Canada and USA to use instead of "eat local food" would be to "eat out". "Eat local food" sounds very formal.
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