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House work I live alone, so I don't have the people who spread my house work. I must do it by myself:( I enjoy washing the clothes, because it's automatic. I can take care of other house work. I hate putting back the dishes because it's razy. When I was a child, I didn't have to pull my waight with the house work. My grandmother always did it. But now I have to do it. I have to think how to enjoy the work!

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I live alone, so I don't have other people to share my house work.

I must do it by myself :(.

I enjoy washing the clothes with the laundry machine, because it's automatic.

Like Micah said, be specific about what is automatic. e.g The laundry machine is great because it's automatic.

I can take care of other house work.

I hate putting back the dishes because it's crazy(?).

When I was a child, I didn't have to pull my own weight with house work because my grandmother always did it. But now I have to do it.

I have to think about how to enjoy the work!

:) Good job, just some words missing that are needed to make sentences/ideas flow.

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House work

I live alone, so I don't have other people who spread  do my house work.
I must do it by myself:(

not sure how you were trying to use the word "spread"

I enjoy washing the clothes because I have an automatic washing machine it's automatic. , then I can take care of other house work.

"Because it's automatic" sounds a little strange...I would specify that you have a washing machine. Adding then, continues your thought that having an automatic washing machine allows  you to do other things.

I hate putting back the dishes because it's crazy.

When I was a child, I didn't have to pull my weight with the house work, because my grandmother always did it.

But now that I have to do it, I have to think how find ways  to enjoy the work!


Good job overall by the way!...I understood your intent, it's just a matter of a few grammatical and flow corrections.

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