[ My Busan itinerary on Google Maps 93]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would
you go about writing it?
Which part should I describe with details? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand them.
(Part Two)
I categorized the places under four categories:
(1) "Favorites" for a hotel or hostel that I may choose.
(2) "Want to go" for places that interest me.
(3) "Starred places" for the restaurant I want to visit or places where I can buy the food.
(4) "Done" for places I've already visited.
I am able to visualize more clearly the locations and some nearby modes of transportation.
If I don't get to visit certain sights, I can check them out easily on my future trips. Also, we can share these maps with someone.
It is a very satisfying for me.
Could you tell me pleasant experiences of your itinerary?
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[ My Busan itinerary on Google Maps 93]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how wouldyou go about writing it?
Which part should I describe with details in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can (can what?)
(Part Two)
I categorized the places under four categories:
(1) "Favorites" for a hotel or hostel that I may choose.
(2) "Want to go" for places that interest me.
(3) "Starred places" for the restaurants I want to visit or places where I can buy the food.
(4) "Done" for places I've already visited.
Marking them on the map this way help me I am able to visualize more clearly the locations and some nearby modes of transportation. (you need this context, otherwise the sentence doesn't seem to connect with any of your other thoughts) Also, if I don't get to visit certain sights, I can check them out easily on my future trips it will be easy to remember them for future trips. I could even use this map to share with someone else we can share these maps with someone.
It is a very satisfying for me. (This sentence is grammatically correct, it's just that in English we wouldn't use this phrase to describe this situation.)
So, planning it out this way feels very worthwhile.
Could you tell me pleasant experiences of your itinerary? (Again, not technically wrong, but not a natural sounding sentence)
Have you had a pleasant trip you could share?
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