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What Thinking <Game of Throne> Brought to Me I’ve been watching <Game of Throne> lately which been highly recommended by one of my friends. This show talks about how throne work, how lands come and goes in the old days of Europe. The survival situation is very horrible at the time, people have no power to fight with terrible weather especially winter, it is extremely cold and serious snowing in winter. As a normal people, survival is a super lucky thing because except bad weather, there are wars all around there. Men need to join the wars and the land may be ruined by enemy as well. Heroes is never lack in a show, so this one does. But even heroes, their lives are also easy to took away as it is a game of throne. No one can keep the honor all the time, people would love you today and spurn you tomorrow. Compare to honor, living is more important and require to be smart and compromise. There are romance stories too. Khaleesi has been offered to a leader of a tribe as a gift by her brother. She is smart and brave enough to get respect from the leader-her husband. The leader can’t help to fall in love with this offered wife and she is also love him because of his respect. The leader also die in an easily way, which made me feel sad. But I know that is real life not an fairy tale which loved people can always have happy endings.

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"There are romance stories too. Khaleesi has been offered to a leader of a tribe as a gift by her brother. She is smart and brave enough to get respect from the leader-her husband. The leader can’t help to fall in love with this offered wife and she is also love him because of his respect. The leader also die in an easily way, which made me feel sad. But I know that is real life not an fairy tale which loved people can always have happy endings."

There are some romantic and intriguing stories in the movie too. Khaleesi was exclaimed to be a tribal leader by the people (in support of her brothers). She was a clever woman to know how to win her husband's respect. The leader could not resist the strong affection for his wife but his wife loved him simply because of deep respect to the leader. At the end, the leader was killed for an indecent reason, which made me feel sad. I know the real life is impossible as the same as a fairy tale in which every good person seems to  have a proper reward and all genuine love can have a happy ending.   

I am not a native speaker unable to correct your paragraph word by word but that is my description in English according to your expression. Hope that can help you a little bit. 


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"Heroes is never lack in a show, so this one does. But even heroes, their lives are also easy to took away as it is a game of throne. No one can keep the honor all the time, people would love you today and spurn you tomorrow. Compare to honor, living is more important and require to be smart and compromise."

A real hero is never absent in this movie but unfortunately  their life is as vulnerable as an ant when they were confronted with dishonesty and disloyalty. In a sense, survival is much more precious than gaining power which needs know when and how to compromise. 

I am not a native speaker unable to correct your paragraph word by word but that is my description in English according to your expression. Hope that can help you a little bit. 

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