请告诉我。下面的句子对不对
我的女儿在互联网上遇到了男朋友。
当他们见面了，他们就一见钟情。
他们的约会过很浪漫。
一年后，他们结婚了。
我的女儿很开心
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我的女儿在互联网上遇到了男朋友。(grammatically correct. However, we will say"我女儿在互联网上认识她的男朋友。" 遇到is meet but actually your daughter not only just met her boyfriend but also got to know him. So we tend to use"认识" here)
当他们见面了(一见面他们)就一见钟情了。
他们的约会过很浪漫。
一年后，他们结婚了。
我的女儿很开心。
You did a great job!! A little unnatural but still a good writing!! Keep trying!!
Ruby
我的女儿在互联网上遇到了男朋友。(grammatically correct. However, we will say"我女儿在互联网上认识她的男朋友。" 遇到is meet but actually your daughter not only just met her boyfriend but also got to know him. So we tend to use"认识" here)
他们的约会
一年后，他们结婚了。
我的女儿很开心。
You did a great job!! A little unnatural but still a good writing!! Keep trying!!
Ruby
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请告诉我。下面的句子对不对
我的女儿在互联网上遇到了男朋友。 我的女儿在互联网上遇到了她的男朋友当他们见面了，他们就一见钟情。
他们的约会过很浪漫。 他们的约会过程很浪漫
一年后，他们结婚了。
我的女儿很开心
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