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暖茶很放松 在秋季些天一点冷,所以我喜欢喝暖茶和被子下,舒服,舒服。但是我仍然更喜欢夏季!

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暖茶令人很放松解/纾缓/

在秋天季有些日子会有天一点冷,I am guessing you are trying to express, "These few days in autumn are a bit cold"  所以因此我喜欢喝暖茶和滾在被子里下,很舒服,太舒服了。不过但是我仍然更喜欢夏季!"还是" is more colloquial.  "仍然" is more literary and a elegantly expressed.  You are progressing :)
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暖茶很放松

在秋季﹑些天氣有一点冷,所以我喜欢喝暖茶和躲在被子裡下,舒服,舒服。但是我仍然更喜欢夏季!
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在秋季,些天天气有点冷,所以我喜欢喝暖热茶和裹在被子里,舒服,舒服。但是我仍然不过我还是更喜欢夏季!
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在秋季,天气有一点冷,所以我喜欢喝热茶和钻被子。虽然在被子里很舒服,很舒服。但是我仍然更喜欢夏季!

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