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Please help me correct my composition, thank you! Dear Bob I am writing to express my sincere apology to you, because I have just noticed that the CD of the Beatles I borrowed from you, which should have been put on your desk before I left Canada, is now in my personal baggage. What a terrible mistake! To solve the problem, I’d like to offer two recommendations. How about you buy a same one in your city and I pay the price? Or I will send the CD to you by express. Please tell me which settlement could satisfy you. I feel so sorry for the inconvenience I have caused. Looking forward to your early reply.

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Please help me correct my composition, thank you!

Dear Bob
I am writing to express my sincere apology to you, because I have just noticed that the CD of the Beatles I borrowed from you, which should have been put on your desk before I left Canada, is now in my personal baggage. What a terrible mistake!
there are two solutions that may conpensate my fault.firstly, could you buy the same one in your city and I will pay for it? secondly,I will send the same one to you by express as soon as possible. Please tell me which settlement would you like.
I feel so sorry for the inconvenience I have caused. Looking forward to your early reply.
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Please help me correct my composition, thank you!

Dear Bob
I am writing to express my sincere apology to you, because I have just noticed that the Beatles CD of the Beatles I borrowed from you, which should have been put on your desk before I left Canada, is now was in my personal baggage. What a terrible mistake!
To solve the problem, I’d like to offer two recommendations options. How about you buy a the same one in your city and I will pay the price you back? Or I will send the CD to you by express mail. Please tell me which settlement method you prefer could satisfy you.
I feel so sorry for the inconvenience I have caused. Looking forward to your early quick reply.

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