清々しい朝ですね！
私は毎日七時半に起きて、ヨガをします三十分。よがをした後、朝ご飯をたべて、シャワーを浴びます。週末勉強できますが、平日できません、何故なら働かなくてならないからです。家を出る前は歯を磨いて、服を着ます。10時電車を乗ります。11時私の学校に入ります。
Every day, I wake up at 7:30 then do yoga for 30 minutes. After doing yoga, I have breakfast and have a shower. At the weekend, I can study but during the week I can't because I have to go to work. Before I leave the house, I brush my teeth and get dressed. At 10 I catch the train. I arrive at my school at 11.
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私は毎日七時半に起きて、ヨガを30分します。ヨガをした後、朝ご飯を食べて、シャワーを浴びます。週末は勉強できますが、平日はできません、何故なら働かなくてならないからです。家を出る前は歯を磨いて、服を着ます。10時に電車を乗ります。11時に私の学校に着きます。 Every day, I wake up at 7:30 then do yoga for 30 minutes. After doing yoga, I have breakfast and have a shower. At the weekend, I can study but during the week I can't because I have to go to work. Before I leave the house, I brush my teeth and get dressed. At 10 I catch the train. I arrive at my school at 11.
In Japanese, "arrive " means 「〜に着く」.
However, 「〜に入る」means "enter".
I think Japanese is very strange language, but your Japanese is so easy to read for me!
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清々しい朝ですね！
私は毎日七時半に起きて、（三十分）ヨガをします三十分。よが（ヨガ）をした後、朝ご飯をたべて、シャワーを浴びます。週末（は）勉強できますが、平日（は）できません、（。）何故なら働かなくてならないからです。家を出る前は（に）歯を磨いて、服を着ます。10時（の）電車を（に）乗ります。11時（に）私の（私が働いている）学校に入ります（着きます）。Every day, I wake up at 7:30 then do yoga for 30 minutes. After doing yoga, I have breakfast and have a shower. At the weekend, I can study but during the week I can't because I have to go to work. Before I leave the house, I brush my teeth and get dressed. At 10 I catch the train. I arrive at my school at 11.
You are a teacher, aren't you? 「私の学校」 could mean both where you study and where you teach (or work). So 「私が働いている学校」 would be better because it' s clearer and also sounds more natural. If you would like to suggest that you are a teacher, 「私が教えている学校」 would be a better choice.
By the way, I do yoga myself. It's really good to keep your body and mind healthy. My body is very flexible!
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清々しい朝ですね！
私は毎日七時半に起きて、ヨガをします三十分。Every day, I wake up at 7:30 then do yoga for 30 minutes. After doing yoga, I have breakfast and have a shower. At the weekend, I can study but during the week I can't because I have to go to work. Before I leave the house, I brush my teeth and get dressed. At 10 I catch the train. I arrive at my school at 11.
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