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The Importance of Curiosity
"I have no talent, I am only passionately curious." is a proverb full of logic, which reminds us that curiosity is an essence factor for one to achieve success.
As for us college students, being curious about something is of great importance. There are two reasons accountable for this statement. To begin with, curiosity is a great power to push us forward and chase our dream, which makes us tirelessly keep work hard. What's more, figuring out what you truly interested in is a way in point to make your future clearer. On the other hand, If we are just forced to finish something without curiosity, we may get through of it much harder.
Examples can be easily found to make this point evident. Study is a good case. Even if one is extremely hard working but with dull attitude, he or she could hardly make the same progress as who are positively interested in it.
To sum up, curiosity is of great importance for those who are determined to make a difference. It can assist us to make progress as well as finding our future.
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Could you please correct it?
The importance of curiosity."I have no talent, I am only passionately curious." is a proverb full of logic, which reminds us that curiosity is an essencial factor for one to achieve success.
As for us college students, being curious about something is of great importance. There are two reasons accountable for this statement. To begin with, curiosity is a great power to help push us forward and chase/persue our dreams, which makes us tirelessly keep working hard tirelessly. What's more, figuring out what you are truly interested in is a way in point to make your future clearer. On the other hand, If we are just forced to finish something without curiosity, we may find such a task hard to complete. get through of it much harder.
Examples can be easily found to make this point evident. Study is a good case. Even if one is extremely hard working but with has a dull attitude, he or she could hardly make the same progress as those who are positively actually interested in it.
To sum up, curiosity is of great importance for those who are determined to make a difference. It can assist us in making to make progress as well as finding our future path.
Hi Li mo. Your use of linking words is great. I would suggest that you look for a synonym for the word "make" as you have use it many times in your writing.
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